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3/17/2008 c7 23Erendhyl
This is an awesome story! That's about all I can say. Great job, I really enjoy reading this!
3/17/2008 c6 Erendhyl
Yeah! Have Sakura beat the crap out of Sasuke! That's always fun. I can't wait to see his reaction in the actual series to learning that she's not just a little wimp anymore. Preferably, he learns this from being on the receiving end of one of her punches. Muhahaha. (I never entirely forgave him for leaving; I just pity him a lot.)
3/17/2008 c5 Erendhyl
You made Mioko sound almost exactly like Karin. Annoying, fangirlish, evil... It's amazing how often Kishimoto's ideas pop up almost identically in fanfiction... You have to wonder if he reads this stuff...
3/17/2008 c3 Erendhyl
(I am not trying to be mean by saying this, but I went crazy as soon as I saw this.) Sasuke actually wouldn't have killed that guy. He makes it a point to prevent the unnecessary deaths of those he does not know. Which is why he always tells Suigetsu not to go on a killing spree after Team Hebi is formed. However, it adds enough to the plot that it doesn't really matter, and it sure was cool! I agree with your statement at the end: Sasuke is really hard to keep in character during SasuSaku stories.
3/17/2008 c2 Erendhyl
You're doing a very good job of keeping them in character. Sasuke does act like he changed that much in the manga, and I do think that Sakura has to feel SOME bitterness towards him after he left her like that. This is an interesting story, and I have enjoyed reading it so far.
3/16/2008 c3 2GoodnightSleepTight
It's getting really interesting at this point :
3/12/2008 c18 Giselle
Lovely story, has a good plot, do consider a sequel :)
3/4/2008 c18 3Bhria-hime
brava! now... please finish the ideal boyfriend! i loved this story!
3/3/2008 c18 vwaterlily
Aw, cute! Awesome ending! Great story! Consider a sequel! :P
3/3/2008 c17 vwaterlily
SWEET!
3/3/2008 c16 vwaterlily
Ooh! He's growing softer! YATTA! :D
3/3/2008 c15 vwaterlily
DIE, Hayubi! AGAIN!
3/3/2008 c14 vwaterlily
Yay! Go Sakura!
3/3/2008 c13 vwaterlily
No! Oh well, expected it.
3/3/2008 c12 vwaterlily
Aw, Sasuke's so sweet...compared to how he was in the beginning...anyways. Sakura has to win! I'm not sure if she will, though. It would cause more drama. We'll see...
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