for Ne Me Mori Facias7/27/2010 c1 Cased In Darkness
And this story isn't finished WHY? You're a great writer, especially when writing about death, yet 4 years have passed since writing this and you haven't posted the last chapter. Please finish it soon, I beg you! I will be waiting
And this story isn't finished WHY? You're a great writer, especially when writing about death, yet 4 years have passed since writing this and you haven't posted the last chapter. Please finish it soon, I beg you! I will be waiting
7/8/2010 c1 helloiamsky
DOUBLE ZOMG!
This is like, ultra awesome and awesomely sad and awesome!
PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!
DOUBLE ZOMG!
This is like, ultra awesome and awesomely sad and awesome!
PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!
8/15/2009 c1 
2youdidwinsodidi
IWANTTHISTOBECONTINUED D:
The last line just ... blablublbublalbla'd me out D:
CONTINUE D:
2youdidwinsodidiIWANTTHISTOBECONTINUED D:
The last line just ... blablublbublalbla'd me out D:
CONTINUE D:
11/9/2008 c1 brandy
This is so sad and good... It reminds me of romeo and julet.
keep up the good work
This is so sad and good... It reminds me of romeo and julet.
keep up the good work
3/19/2008 c1 9Emi1988
Its not bad but stomach wounds like that, if taken care of early and carefully enough can be survived. *Is a medical student*
9Emi1988Its not bad but stomach wounds like that, if taken care of early and carefully enough can be survived. *Is a medical student*
1/6/2007 c1 4Touketsu Iji
Hye..
sorry im late with the response. haven't been on in forever :sweatdrop:
anyways, Great story. a little angsty, and yeah, i can see the romeo and juliet part. though if everything was following along.. Kuro-pon would be juliet, and Fai Romeo... and that makes very little sense...
oh well...
basically im saying i'd like it more with the characters reversed. but otherwise, this is a very good story.
and yeah, once again, kinda sorry bout not responding... woah, i got a mention in here too...
4Touketsu IjiHye..
sorry im late with the response. haven't been on in forever :sweatdrop:
anyways, Great story. a little angsty, and yeah, i can see the romeo and juliet part. though if everything was following along.. Kuro-pon would be juliet, and Fai Romeo... and that makes very little sense...
oh well...
basically im saying i'd like it more with the characters reversed. but otherwise, this is a very good story.
and yeah, once again, kinda sorry bout not responding... woah, i got a mention in here too...
9/23/2006 c1 3All Kinds of Awsome
What kind of idiot wouldn't review? Fai's dieing! Omg, please, please say you're continuing! Awesome by the way, bt don't let him die! TT-TT
3All Kinds of AwsomeWhat kind of idiot wouldn't review? Fai's dieing! Omg, please, please say you're continuing! Awesome by the way, bt don't let him die! TT-TT
9/22/2006 c1 skirnir06079
AH! HOW DARE YOU END IT SO ABRUPTLY! Bloodytwistedangel, one of my best friends in the whole world, sent me to you; she's getting a gigantic glomp when I see her next! Yes, thank you, thank you for making me feel so extremely sad; but you better finish that or I'm going to find you and force you to.
AH! HOW DARE YOU END IT SO ABRUPTLY! Bloodytwistedangel, one of my best friends in the whole world, sent me to you; she's getting a gigantic glomp when I see her next! Yes, thank you, thank you for making me feel so extremely sad; but you better finish that or I'm going to find you and force you to.
8/29/2006 c1 Dhgffu
Wow.
You made me cry... That's not a normal thing for me.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
(Please don't kill them!)
Wow.
You made me cry... That's not a normal thing for me.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
(Please don't kill them!)
8/14/2006 c1 FB Edit
that sucks...NOT THE STORY the story is good (not very original, but then again it is) I mean the whole thing...yes very sad and ironic
that sucks...NOT THE STORY the story is good (not very original, but then again it is) I mean the whole thing...yes very sad and ironic
8/6/2006 c1 1StormDarkblade
WAH! Make him live! D I'm crying right now and my grandparents think I'm crazy! xD
But yeah, thats so sad! ;_; It's such a beautiful story, and so sad. xD Keep up the great work!
1StormDarkbladeWAH! Make him live! D I'm crying right now and my grandparents think I'm crazy! xD
But yeah, thats so sad! ;_; It's such a beautiful story, and so sad. xD Keep up the great work!
7/10/2006 c1 21DemonUntilDeath
This is a pretty interesting story so far! I'm interested in seeing what will happen to the two. Can't wait for an update. Oh, but one tidbit; when writing dialogue, don't press the enter button between dialogue and who spoke it.
Fai smirked, "It's kind of..."
You don't want to put an enter between those two parts of the sentence, since it's all one sentence.
Great story, I hope you update soon.
21DemonUntilDeathThis is a pretty interesting story so far! I'm interested in seeing what will happen to the two. Can't wait for an update. Oh, but one tidbit; when writing dialogue, don't press the enter button between dialogue and who spoke it.
Fai smirked, "It's kind of..."
You don't want to put an enter between those two parts of the sentence, since it's all one sentence.
Great story, I hope you update soon.