for Machine Mayhem3/26/2012 c5 Lightning Lynx
Why is he a cyborg and not a ghost?
Why is he a cyborg and not a ghost?
1/29/2012 c2 
1Ribke
At the last sentence from the doctor, I couldnt help but add one of those dramatic sound effects, like the one they use with the fairy doctor in "Fairly Oddparents" XD
1RibkeAt the last sentence from the doctor, I couldnt help but add one of those dramatic sound effects, like the one they use with the fairy doctor in "Fairly Oddparents" XD
1/29/2012 c1 Ribke
What's with Jack Fenton and peeps here always giving him AT LEAST one of my dad's characteristics (no ghost hunting included, of course. Unlike most Americans, we lack free time)?
What's with Jack Fenton and peeps here always giving him AT LEAST one of my dad's characteristics (no ghost hunting included, of course. Unlike most Americans, we lack free time)?
6/15/2011 c9 serin2
The water must be boiling BEFORE the noodles go in. The taste is messed up otherwise.
Just FYI.
ja ne,
The water must be boiling BEFORE the noodles go in. The taste is messed up otherwise.
Just FYI.
ja ne,
8/27/2008 c1 Kiomori
I really liked this story and I think the cyborg idea is really unique! I can't wait to read the sequel!
I really liked this story and I think the cyborg idea is really unique! I can't wait to read the sequel!
8/15/2007 c13 Kraven the Hunter
A nice conclusion to this story. I loved his escape; those doctors didn't stand a chance of stopping him! I suppose now he's a Thirda though: a third-a human, a third-a ghost, & a third-a machine! It was good for him to tell his family too. Sayonara!
A nice conclusion to this story. I loved his escape; those doctors didn't stand a chance of stopping him! I suppose now he's a Thirda though: a third-a human, a third-a ghost, & a third-a machine! It was good for him to tell his family too. Sayonara!
8/13/2007 c13 14Aquawyrm
Wow, a prolouge fic. I love these! It's always so fun to read the rest of it!
14AquawyrmWow, a prolouge fic. I love these! It's always so fun to read the rest of it!
2/1/2007 c12 Linda
That was really cool and kinda scary at the end. 1 chapter left? No! But you're doing a sequel! Yay! Can't wait!
That was really cool and kinda scary at the end. 1 chapter left? No! But you're doing a sequel! Yay! Can't wait!
1/31/2007 c12 Plushiemon
-screams-
-deep breath-
-screams again until everyone's eardrums explode-
-coughcough- Really great! Super fantastic! Yes, I'm trying my hardest not to implode right now! -forced smile-
Just have to say something. I LOVE how you did this: "allow those who are caught in its gentle breeze to fall into a peaceful nap, too tired to pay attention to anything alse like the pressure on his mouth, unconsciousness taking over and the feeling of being lifted up and away from the park."
It was absolutely perfect.
-screams-
-deep breath-
-screams again until everyone's eardrums explode-
-coughcough- Really great! Super fantastic! Yes, I'm trying my hardest not to implode right now! -forced smile-
Just have to say something. I LOVE how you did this: "allow those who are caught in its gentle breeze to fall into a peaceful nap, too tired to pay attention to anything alse like the pressure on his mouth, unconsciousness taking over and the feeling of being lifted up and away from the park."
It was absolutely perfect.