for With You1/18/2010 c1 lalaz nerdy
awesome huge v/a fan
awesome huge v/a fan
1/16/2010 c1 
12kittiekat10105
AW! I love Aika/Vyse! They're awesome! This was perfect! I hope you write a post-battle fic sometime!
12kittiekat10105AW! I love Aika/Vyse! They're awesome! This was perfect! I hope you write a post-battle fic sometime!
10/7/2004 c1 21Sensational Sista
Fluff... yes.
But cute beyond beleif... YES!
I am a major Vyse n Aika Supporter. ^_^
I like that ause it was in the game.
Quite good.
~Sista
21Sensational SistaFluff... yes.
But cute beyond beleif... YES!
I am a major Vyse n Aika Supporter. ^_^
I like that ause it was in the game.
Quite good.
~Sista
8/21/2004 c1 ukyouluvr
Aika's 'voice' shines through rather well in this short story. The piece itself does its job well and conveys the emotions nicely. The actual events in the fic are poorly conceptualized - I liked them, but there was little outside the norm for emotional fics. Overall - a very nice short piece! ^_^
-AIM:ukyouluvr
Aika's 'voice' shines through rather well in this short story. The piece itself does its job well and conveys the emotions nicely. The actual events in the fic are poorly conceptualized - I liked them, but there was little outside the norm for emotional fics. Overall - a very nice short piece! ^_^
-AIM:ukyouluvr
8/10/2004 c1 16Seven Positions
*sigh* This is great for a first-time fic! *sniff* You portrayed that scene so well! I really don't have any criticism(Although there might be some to be said- I never have any criticism).
16Seven Positions*sigh* This is great for a first-time fic! *sniff* You portrayed that scene so well! I really don't have any criticism(Although there might be some to be said- I never have any criticism).
9/15/2003 c1 5Vandesdelca
Your first fanfic? 0.0! How the heck did you write so well? Aika was in character, and the story used some good descriptions. Great job! I'll have to read your other stuff!
5VandesdelcaYour first fanfic? 0.0! How the heck did you write so well? Aika was in character, and the story used some good descriptions. Great job! I'll have to read your other stuff!
9/12/2003 c1 2Aika-kun
This is REALLY good! It's what that scene should have been like, Aika is meant for Vyse and vice versa! I luv them! Good work
Aikao
2Aika-kunThis is REALLY good! It's what that scene should have been like, Aika is meant for Vyse and vice versa! I luv them! Good work
Aikao
9/4/2003 c1 Big T
I apologize for the enigmatic name. It's what I plan to use when I finally create an account here.
So, your first fanfic, huh? I can tell you've done some writing elsewhere in the past. This piece is very well-written, I applaud you for keeping things simple. You should definitely write more stories, you are one of the few people I've seen here with anything even resembling potential. If you don't know what I mean, read "The Ruins of Tal'kien" (or whatever it is called).
I apologize for the enigmatic name. It's what I plan to use when I finally create an account here.
So, your first fanfic, huh? I can tell you've done some writing elsewhere in the past. This piece is very well-written, I applaud you for keeping things simple. You should definitely write more stories, you are one of the few people I've seen here with anything even resembling potential. If you don't know what I mean, read "The Ruins of Tal'kien" (or whatever it is called).
2/4/2003 c1 BJ
Dang, that was very sweet and I really loved it. It'd made me smile! ^_^
Dang, that was very sweet and I really loved it. It'd made me smile! ^_^
10/16/2002 c1 DJ
Nice! Make some more Aika/Vyse fanfics! I like to read those then Fina/Vyse fics. Any way, keep it up!
Nice! Make some more Aika/Vyse fanfics! I like to read those then Fina/Vyse fics. Any way, keep it up!
12/12/2001 c1 Link621
*cheers* Yea! That was a great telling of the events in the game. (One of my fav. parts...) It was also refreshing *cough damn well time cough* to hear something Aika/Vyse friendly. Keep it up! ~link
*cheers* Yea! That was a great telling of the events in the game. (One of my fav. parts...) It was also refreshing *cough damn well time cough* to hear something Aika/Vyse friendly. Keep it up! ~link
12/7/2001 c1 Sailor Nova
You rock!
A fan fic I was looking for about my 2nd and 3rd favorite charatures (Gilder is my fav).
Suggestion: Write one about Fina and Ramirez!
And make him not-dead!
You rock!
A fan fic I was looking for about my 2nd and 3rd favorite charatures (Gilder is my fav).
Suggestion: Write one about Fina and Ramirez!
And make him not-dead!
11/30/2001 c1 LooBy
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! cute. Yeah you write good(make sure Aika's perfectly spunky!). I'd like ta see how you'd write that battle she's on about.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! cute. Yeah you write good(make sure Aika's perfectly spunky!). I'd like ta see how you'd write that battle she's on about.
11/10/2001 c1 Mike
Hey, that was really exceptional. It's pretty rare to find a good-quality POV Arcadia fic, especially one so well-done. You portrayed the scene before they fight Galcian perfectly, with no visible flaws, at least to me. Also, you fought the urge to forget the storyline, and turn the whole thing into a Lemon, and that's also a credible accomplishment. Keep up the good work, and e-mail me if you want to talk.
Hey, that was really exceptional. It's pretty rare to find a good-quality POV Arcadia fic, especially one so well-done. You portrayed the scene before they fight Galcian perfectly, with no visible flaws, at least to me. Also, you fought the urge to forget the storyline, and turn the whole thing into a Lemon, and that's also a credible accomplishment. Keep up the good work, and e-mail me if you want to talk.