for do you?11/11/2006 c7 
6Violingeeknm
This chapter was good, I love that they all kicked Jake out. Can't wait to see what happens next!
6ViolingeeknmThis chapter was good, I love that they all kicked Jake out. Can't wait to see what happens next!
11/11/2006 c7 20Realilly
hermione stayed outside for the night? :( thatz kind of odd.
PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR.
MAKE JAKE HIT ON GINNY.
AND THEN MAKE GINNY SLAP HIM.
:D
ok, maybe not the "hitting on" part...but i really want some1 to slap him!
20Realillyhermione stayed outside for the night? :( thatz kind of odd.
PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR.
MAKE JAKE HIT ON GINNY.
AND THEN MAKE GINNY SLAP HIM.
:D
ok, maybe not the "hitting on" part...but i really want some1 to slap him!
11/10/2006 c6 4Keikolilo
Kinda obvious who walked in, is it Jake? Gr... this Jake character keeps popping up whenever he is least wanted! I hope Ron and Hermione get together soon, they make such a cute couple! I have one suggestion: you should read over your work carefully, because there's a few typos and stuff, but otherwise it's great. I really liked this chapter. :)
~ Keikolilo ^_^
4KeikoliloKinda obvious who walked in, is it Jake? Gr... this Jake character keeps popping up whenever he is least wanted! I hope Ron and Hermione get together soon, they make such a cute couple! I have one suggestion: you should read over your work carefully, because there's a few typos and stuff, but otherwise it's great. I really liked this chapter. :)
~ Keikolilo ^_^
11/6/2006 c5 Keikolilo
Cute storyline, loved the Ron and Hermione bits. Jake is annoying, he should let Hermione be! lol. Hope you finish it soon!
~ Keikolilo ^_^
Cute storyline, loved the Ron and Hermione bits. Jake is annoying, he should let Hermione be! lol. Hope you finish it soon!
~ Keikolilo ^_^
8/14/2006 c5 1tinavel
hey first of all thanks 4 reviewing my work i really apreciate. and plsplspsls uipdate urs asap i like this story!
1tinavelhey first of all thanks 4 reviewing my work i really apreciate. and plsplspsls uipdate urs asap i like this story!
8/10/2006 c1 ashley
Wow, this is such a great story line! I love the part about Hermione telling him that she loves him when hes asleep, thats so cute:)! just becareful that it doesnt start not to sound the way JK rowling writes her diolog, but u seem to be gdoing a great job for the most part:)! aw i loved it! And just one last thing, i think that it needs more description, in between the dialog because u dont find out they're at the burrow until later on so it leaves u wondering where they are but all in all FANTASTIC JOB! cant wait to read the next chapter:):):)
Wow, this is such a great story line! I love the part about Hermione telling him that she loves him when hes asleep, thats so cute:)! just becareful that it doesnt start not to sound the way JK rowling writes her diolog, but u seem to be gdoing a great job for the most part:)! aw i loved it! And just one last thing, i think that it needs more description, in between the dialog because u dont find out they're at the burrow until later on so it leaves u wondering where they are but all in all FANTASTIC JOB! cant wait to read the next chapter:):):)
7/15/2006 c5 INSANEPRINCE
you must write more please tell me there's more for the sake of love on earth please write more. Please respond to me this story for some reason reached me hard please... write more
Love
NeverLoveAnother
you must write more please tell me there's more for the sake of love on earth please write more. Please respond to me this story for some reason reached me hard please... write more
Love
NeverLoveAnother