for One Wish11/28/2022 c21 Guest
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11/22/2022 c21 Guest
This was such a great story too bad you could not finish it but even so at this cliff hanger its nice. It would have taken probably 5 or 6 more chapters and it could've ended.
This was such a great story too bad you could not finish it but even so at this cliff hanger its nice. It would have taken probably 5 or 6 more chapters and it could've ended.
3/19/2021 c21 Maya
Are u going to write more of this story?
Are u going to write more of this story?
5/1/2020 c20 DragonCurse4
Checking back after 9 years to say it's such a shame that this never got it's sequel.
Checking back after 9 years to say it's such a shame that this never got it's sequel.
12/14/2018 c1 revinzy
Its written on 2006 so i think i would let all the typos and mispelled slide...
It was funny tho
Its written on 2006 so i think i would let all the typos and mispelled slide...
It was funny tho
6/11/2018 c4 
2snowrabbit2012
Sorry, something is just so wrong with Sakura here she's not this bitchy and whiney.
Also god, 4 days no bath and they had sex. Hygiene dude. That's gross.
Dropping this on this chapter. Everything was too fast.
2snowrabbit2012Sorry, something is just so wrong with Sakura here she's not this bitchy and whiney.
Also god, 4 days no bath and they had sex. Hygiene dude. That's gross.
Dropping this on this chapter. Everything was too fast.
11/15/2017 c21 Guest
Fuck sasusaku. Sasuke does not even like his family enough to stay or recognize sarada. Saradas a drunk one night stand or karins kid by stealing sasukes sperm without his knowledge.
Fuck sasusaku. Sasuke does not even like his family enough to stay or recognize sarada. Saradas a drunk one night stand or karins kid by stealing sasukes sperm without his knowledge.
12/7/2016 c21 Fiona
I hope you haven't died...cuz this is a really amazing story and beautifully written story! I hope you update.
I hope you haven't died...cuz this is a really amazing story and beautifully written story! I hope you update.