for Fool Me Once1/29/2018 c4 
2apersonwholikes
This is amazing! I love your writing style; I don't believe I found a single major error in here at all! The story is delightful, and the amount of detail you use is perfect - not too much, and not too little. The way the relationship progresses in a more reasonable time frame than immediately starting out with something all-too-romantic, but still keeping the romance there, is what I like to see in more romantic stories. Also how you worded what each character said, I enjoyed, as well. There were very few quotations I thought could be reworded to fit the characters better - which is also rare, considering most writers, including myself, find it difficult to write the characters speeches like they would be in the original. As I've stated, I love your story. At the same time, I want to see more, but I also think the ending here is perfect. Wonderful job!
2apersonwholikesThis is amazing! I love your writing style; I don't believe I found a single major error in here at all! The story is delightful, and the amount of detail you use is perfect - not too much, and not too little. The way the relationship progresses in a more reasonable time frame than immediately starting out with something all-too-romantic, but still keeping the romance there, is what I like to see in more romantic stories. Also how you worded what each character said, I enjoyed, as well. There were very few quotations I thought could be reworded to fit the characters better - which is also rare, considering most writers, including myself, find it difficult to write the characters speeches like they would be in the original. As I've stated, I love your story. At the same time, I want to see more, but I also think the ending here is perfect. Wonderful job!
7/10/2015 c4 14Poppy the Rabbit
This was so fucking cute! The last chapter was written with a lot of thought, you could tell, with the witty dialogue. I wasn't quite expecting Jinx to toss Kid Flash out of the car, I have to admit. But that's definetly a Jinx thing to do.
14Poppy the RabbitThis was so fucking cute! The last chapter was written with a lot of thought, you could tell, with the witty dialogue. I wasn't quite expecting Jinx to toss Kid Flash out of the car, I have to admit. But that's definetly a Jinx thing to do.
3/30/2013 c4 Guest
haha cute
haha cute
6/20/2012 c1 shea
love it
love it
8/30/2011 c4 22a paper flower
Ok. I really like this story. You ht the characters perfectly, and it's just amazing!
22a paper flowerOk. I really like this story. You ht the characters perfectly, and it's just amazing!
1/1/2011 c4 99The.Ocean.Shadow
This was amazing! I wish it could have been longer, though. Oh, well. (: this was great either way.
99The.Ocean.ShadowThis was amazing! I wish it could have been longer, though. Oh, well. (: this was great either way.
3/9/2010 c4 LilyRoseTheDreamer
Great story. He's still alive!
Great story. He's still alive!