for My Last Breath7/9/2006 c1 
27Aiedail01
This was a good idea. I love the song, and I love how the fic fits it perfectly.
Just one thing... Sectumsempra doesn't actually kill people. You can easily heal a person who has been cursed with it.
27Aiedail01This was a good idea. I love the song, and I love how the fic fits it perfectly.
Just one thing... Sectumsempra doesn't actually kill people. You can easily heal a person who has been cursed with it.
7/6/2006 c1 20Realilly
i luved it xcept 4 1 thing...the avada kedavra spell workz immediately, right? she would b dead instantly. but GOOD JOB otherwise! i liked the song, it really meshed well!
20Realillyi luved it xcept 4 1 thing...the avada kedavra spell workz immediately, right? she would b dead instantly. but GOOD JOB otherwise! i liked the song, it really meshed well!
7/6/2006 c1 sugarquill4ron
you know what's weird? i wrote a story (that is never finished, lol) about the final battle and on one side you have Voldie with his gang of hooligans behind him and on the other end, there stood Harry with all the wizards and witches daring enough to fight the war. But behind harry stood Ron and Hermione, and they had sorta a similar conversation like your Ron and Hermione did in this fic. although hermione didnt die in mine, lmao. Anyway, the whole point to this review is that, your fic reminded me of mine and it's nice to know someone else who envision something similar. I hope that's how it plays out in the real book hehe...you're still a meanie for killing Hermione off though (and Neville!)*waah* and i LOVE this song, so tragic/haunting yet lovely. thanks for sharing this fic! :D
you know what's weird? i wrote a story (that is never finished, lol) about the final battle and on one side you have Voldie with his gang of hooligans behind him and on the other end, there stood Harry with all the wizards and witches daring enough to fight the war. But behind harry stood Ron and Hermione, and they had sorta a similar conversation like your Ron and Hermione did in this fic. although hermione didnt die in mine, lmao. Anyway, the whole point to this review is that, your fic reminded me of mine and it's nice to know someone else who envision something similar. I hope that's how it plays out in the real book hehe...you're still a meanie for killing Hermione off though (and Neville!)*waah* and i LOVE this song, so tragic/haunting yet lovely. thanks for sharing this fic! :D
7/6/2006 c1 kimberley williams
no! hermione ...nevile its just too sad to think about...
no! hermione ...nevile its just too sad to think about...
7/5/2006 c1 5addiedas
OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! REALLY IT WAS i was trying so hard not to cry...omg omg omg...that is so sad...you are a GREAT writer keep it up!
5addiedasOMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! REALLY IT WAS i was trying so hard not to cry...omg omg omg...that is so sad...you are a GREAT writer keep it up!
7/5/2006 c1 18hopealltheincelsfalloffacliff
Thats so sad, yet beautifuly poetic. Very well written, please write more.
18hopealltheincelsfalloffacliffThats so sad, yet beautifuly poetic. Very well written, please write more.
7/5/2006 c1 4firewhisky
this is pretty good however...
a) i think you should use a bit more dialouge with all the lyrics in it
b) try looking over it before you post it, you wrote AVADA KEDAVAR both times instead of AVADA KEDAVRA
**firewhisky**
4firewhiskythis is pretty good however...
a) i think you should use a bit more dialouge with all the lyrics in it
b) try looking over it before you post it, you wrote AVADA KEDAVAR both times instead of AVADA KEDAVRA
**firewhisky**