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11/15/2006 c1 13Applecake
I am utterly impressed! ^^ This story was more than worth reading. It's a pure gem.

You included everything and the descriptions were overwhelming. Very well-written and the plot was lovely.

What was most astonishing was the length! When I saw it, I went, "OMG! AMAZING! Definately reviewing!"

I can feel and hear the character's thoughts and feelings and the dialogue was simply endearing!

I hope you good luck on your future stories because you show good promise.

Anyhow, nice job. I highly enjoyed reading this. ^_~

~Apple-chan~
7/7/2006 c1 13kiebs
i only read half of it bt it is interesting.

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