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1nine lifes
i'm a huge ramirez fan and you did this beautifully. i love how you still managed to capture ramirez's personality, even in his final moments. it's beautifully written. thank you writing such a wonderful piece to a deserving character.
1nine lifesi'm a huge ramirez fan and you did this beautifully. i love how you still managed to capture ramirez's personality, even in his final moments. it's beautifully written. thank you writing such a wonderful piece to a deserving character.
11/25/2005 c1 Silver Latias
Wow. That was amazing. (Don't worry, I'm a sucker for happy endings too ^_^) I was nice to see something other than Ramirez comes back for revenge. It's nice to see that someone else doesn't think that he died bitter and evil. (Actually, I am writing a fic where Ramirez comes back. But he's not evil, and he didn't come back for revenge- he was forced to come back to life)
It's nice to see that some people do believe that the side of Ramirez that he claims "is already dead" is still there.
Great story!
Wow. That was amazing. (Don't worry, I'm a sucker for happy endings too ^_^) I was nice to see something other than Ramirez comes back for revenge. It's nice to see that someone else doesn't think that he died bitter and evil. (Actually, I am writing a fic where Ramirez comes back. But he's not evil, and he didn't come back for revenge- he was forced to come back to life)
It's nice to see that some people do believe that the side of Ramirez that he claims "is already dead" is still there.
Great story!
7/4/2005 c1 1TheGriot
This is one of the most touching stories I have ever seen. Very good, I'd love to see more in this style. I really can't think of anyway to improve. Then again, haven't really written in several years, so why would I?
1TheGriotThis is one of the most touching stories I have ever seen. Very good, I'd love to see more in this style. I really can't think of anyway to improve. Then again, haven't really written in several years, so why would I?
9/15/2003 c1 5Vandesdelca
Wow! I read this on another website, but it's still as good the second time around as it was the first. Good job! :)
5VandesdelcaWow! I read this on another website, but it's still as good the second time around as it was the first. Good job! :)
12/4/2002 c1 Maark
Short and sweet describes it. Roles where the kick-rectum baddies get set free are a breath of fresh air.
Short and sweet describes it. Roles where the kick-rectum baddies get set free are a breath of fresh air.
7/14/2002 c1 1SilverShadow1
Now that I think of it... That bit of crystal was part of Ramirez's Silver Crystal, wasn't it? I like rereading this. It's sad, but a happy kinda sad. And about that fic in progress I talked about last time - it's been ditched. I'm working on two more at the present time, a Pokemon (don't laugh! It's more meaty than the show and games and tells of a theory I have on the Gold/Silver/Crystal Red {Final Battle} and on Ash's disappearance in those games!) and a Cross-Overs thingy like Anthony Bault's, BASED on Anthony Baults - with a few minor and major changes. You'll see them both if I ever finish them, 'cause I only post if the fic is finished.
Signing off.
P.S.: Yes, I'm the same SilverShadow from before. I got an account.
1SilverShadow1Now that I think of it... That bit of crystal was part of Ramirez's Silver Crystal, wasn't it? I like rereading this. It's sad, but a happy kinda sad. And about that fic in progress I talked about last time - it's been ditched. I'm working on two more at the present time, a Pokemon (don't laugh! It's more meaty than the show and games and tells of a theory I have on the Gold/Silver/Crystal Red {Final Battle} and on Ash's disappearance in those games!) and a Cross-Overs thingy like Anthony Bault's, BASED on Anthony Baults - with a few minor and major changes. You'll see them both if I ever finish them, 'cause I only post if the fic is finished.
Signing off.
P.S.: Yes, I'm the same SilverShadow from before. I got an account.
12/12/2001 c1 Link621
That's sweet... poor Ramirez... You, know, I agree with you. I never really thought of Ramirez as evil, just confused. ~Link
That's sweet... poor Ramirez... You, know, I agree with you. I never really thought of Ramirez as evil, just confused. ~Link
9/25/2001 c1 Richie
yay, that was the whole point, that ramirez saw the wrong side of humanity and fina saw the right. Nice ending, you didn't waste time with the bits we all knew either :)
yay, that was the whole point, that ramirez saw the wrong side of humanity and fina saw the right. Nice ending, you didn't waste time with the bits we all knew either :)
9/16/2001 c1 SilverShadow
*sniff* Oh, man, that was just... was just... *sniff* WAAAAAAAAAAAH! Omigigas, that was beautiful. Simply beautiful. I's writing a Ramirez-comes-back-to-life fic, too, but with a really big twist: Ramirez ain't plottin' revenge. He's one of the few with a silver aura, and... Oops. I's giving the VERY original plotline away. Anyhoo, love the story, keep writing, and it's Crescent Isle, not island. Oi. And I DO love the story. Ja.
*sniff* Oh, man, that was just... was just... *sniff* WAAAAAAAAAAAH! Omigigas, that was beautiful. Simply beautiful. I's writing a Ramirez-comes-back-to-life fic, too, but with a really big twist: Ramirez ain't plottin' revenge. He's one of the few with a silver aura, and... Oops. I's giving the VERY original plotline away. Anyhoo, love the story, keep writing, and it's Crescent Isle, not island. Oi. And I DO love the story. Ja.
7/3/2001 c1 Fina the Legend
Nice. I get tired of Ramirez comming back as a evil _ and killing _ to the shock of everyone. It is a nice twist to the Ramirez character. Very Very good. It is definately something different.
Nice. I get tired of Ramirez comming back as a evil _ and killing _ to the shock of everyone. It is a nice twist to the Ramirez character. Very Very good. It is definately something different.
6/19/2001 c1 7Vyse the Blue Rogue
Great job! You put a new view on Rameriz. And your writing skills are wonderful. Again, awesome! 9/10!
PS - Read my SoA fics, too! ^_~
7Vyse the Blue RogueGreat job! You put a new view on Rameriz. And your writing skills are wonderful. Again, awesome! 9/10!
PS - Read my SoA fics, too! ^_~
6/16/2001 c1 stef
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6/8/2001 c1 Psychomage
Well, another well done short fic by Jane. You may be a sucker for happy endings, but at least you actually can keep somenone in charachter. Personally, while I can enjoy those "Ramirez gets revenge" stories (when they're well written anyway), I would like it better if he acually, rested in peace. I would like to see what would happen if you wrote an epic story.
Rating: 9.0 out of 10.
Well, another well done short fic by Jane. You may be a sucker for happy endings, but at least you actually can keep somenone in charachter. Personally, while I can enjoy those "Ramirez gets revenge" stories (when they're well written anyway), I would like it better if he acually, rested in peace. I would like to see what would happen if you wrote an epic story.
Rating: 9.0 out of 10.