for Long Nights And Boxes1/7/2008 c1 
1Statistiques
Hmm...I couldn't follow the plot line because of all of your run on sentences. You may want to consider correcting those. I'll beta if you want!
1StatistiquesHmm...I couldn't follow the plot line because of all of your run on sentences. You may want to consider correcting those. I'll beta if you want!
1/8/2007 c1 Rambie
What the hell?
Oh, good god, this is horrible!
This entire fic is the goddamn run-on sentence from hell, and you can't spell worth shit. What's wrong with you?
No, the 'omg hawt' yaoi doesn't make up for inexusable writing skills. If anything, it makes it worse.
For the love of god, just because you have a keyboard in front of you doesn't mean you're an author.
This monstrosity never should have been released into cyberspace. Step away from the keyboard.
What the hell?
Oh, good god, this is horrible!
This entire fic is the goddamn run-on sentence from hell, and you can't spell worth shit. What's wrong with you?
No, the 'omg hawt' yaoi doesn't make up for inexusable writing skills. If anything, it makes it worse.
For the love of god, just because you have a keyboard in front of you doesn't mean you're an author.
This monstrosity never should have been released into cyberspace. Step away from the keyboard.
1/7/2007 c2 Anon
Good lord...do you know what the term 'spellchecker' means? USE ONE.
Good lord...do you know what the term 'spellchecker' means? USE ONE.