5/14/2014 c1 18Squeeb100
Wow that was long. Okay. But I read all of it, and it was cute! Very nice. And funny. I can't think of any specific concrit...it was too long. But very nice.

7/2/2010 c1 1Bottan
"'He called me an idiot for not sleeping with you,' he breathed, and waited for it."

I forgot to breath at this point... And then I loved the conclusion of the paragraph: "Kurogane thought for a while that he had actually made Fai angry or upset or something, until the four of them sat down to dinner and Fai gave him extra onions."

The start of the fic is great, I love it, e.g. the point at which Fai is crying while laughing over the onions... That's a great picture. I also really liked the beer part... Really, it sounds distinctly more disgusting than in our world... xD'

"Burning red rubies?" Kurogane sounded incredulous. - "Sounds romantic, don't you think?"

I also took a double-take at that... xDDD'

"Syaoran's so brave, isn't he?" - "No, he's a kind-hearted fool!"

Ahahah... xDD'

"Might be still 12, or it could be 13, or it could be anything really… (Festival II.)"

Ahh, the greatness... xD'

"'Because it's dark and lonely in there,' he said. And, in a bizarre moment of clarity, Kurogane knew exactly what he meant."

I love your writing, you know that?

"'Then we did…' Kurogane trailed off"

I love day 13... x3

"'Ninjas don't sweep.' - 'And magicians don't darn Ninja's underwear, but I seem to have done that last week,' Fai retorted."

Ahahahah... xDDD' The dialogue, oh my gosh, the dialogue... Really, I love the light atmosphere, it's hilarious. x3

"Syaoran still felt somewhat like a tiny tiny insect caught between two giant, cruel insect-eating, green, scaly lizards."

They're dangerous like that. x3 Loved Syaoran's part in this... The poor guy, really... I loved the comparison to big lizards, it somehow was so fitting in that exact moment... xD'

"'But I thought Fai-san and Kurogane-san were sleeping together,' Sakura said then, looking somewhat perplexed. 'Down in the cellar…'"

Ahahahah... Is she really innocent like that? :p

"Kurogane drew back abruptly, and Fai turned his head, and they both saw a flustered, red-faced Syaoran frozen by the doorframe."

You stage this so perfectly... great, great scene! x3

"And Kurogane frowned, and cut Fai's hair more carefully than he'd ever done anything in his life."

This is so sweet... x3

"And Fai smiled almost dreamily. Kurogane thought he might like that smile."

Very, very cute. I love how their relationship progressed from the first paragraph till down here. :3

"'I wonder if the next world will be like this,' he said, and Kurogane could tell from the strange look on his face and the lilt of his voice that Fai wasn't really asking about other places."

This is wonderful, really. :)

I absolutely loved this - this was the most natural way I've ever seen Kurogane and Fai act as a couple in a fanfiction before, I believe. I really loved this, it was beautiful and well-written and in-character. It really carried that peaceful feeling, Fai was talking about - the whole city in the desert felt very natural, so did how the travellers handled living there. And of course the rhythm of story-telling seems to come very natural to you - it's pointed and accentuated just in the right places. I really enjoy reading your stories! :D

Thanks so much for sharing and writing! :3

5/28/2009 c1 The Birdy78
That was a nice story. I really liked Fai and Kurogane. Sakura and Syaoran where really funny. I also liked the world you wrote about and how you intagrated their chores and everyday life into the fic without making it boring.

3/29/2009 c1 4pmpatg
long story,but I liked it ^^

really interesting

10/16/2008 c1 1Clici
Wow. The characterization of Kurogane and Fai was really well done. I loved it! :D

2/6/2008 c1 4YonderBailey
Aww, this was really cute and funny, and well-written to boot! ^-^ The poems had me laughing out loud.

12/10/2007 c1 Hopeless Romantic
That was the best thing I have ever read ever. The interactions between Kuro and Fai were SO well written... amazing job. Loved the subtle depth of the emotion. Also quite hilarious in parts. XD Please write more KuroFai soon!