for Survival of the Fittest9/16/2012 c8 
16Guin Parris
This is a really wonderful story! I absolutely love Zorg, and I love how you've written him. You really captured his character. I also love Rakat. She's strong and fun. I am very well impressed. Well done!
16Guin ParrisThis is a really wonderful story! I absolutely love Zorg, and I love how you've written him. You really captured his character. I also love Rakat. She's strong and fun. I am very well impressed. Well done!
2/21/2011 c8 2Nic Coay
This was really great. I was surprised to find fanfiction about Zorg, to be honest, but even more surprised to actually find a really good one. Your story was by far the best of the lot and I sure do hope you pick it up again sometime and finish it. You really did a great job fleshing out Zorg's character, while still keeping him close to his original version, if a little less crazy. And Rakat's a lot of fun. Plus, the backstory about the F-X War causing him to make weapons was super. Really good work.
2Nic CoayThis was really great. I was surprised to find fanfiction about Zorg, to be honest, but even more surprised to actually find a really good one. Your story was by far the best of the lot and I sure do hope you pick it up again sometime and finish it. You really did a great job fleshing out Zorg's character, while still keeping him close to his original version, if a little less crazy. And Rakat's a lot of fun. Plus, the backstory about the F-X War causing him to make weapons was super. Really good work.
5/28/2009 c1 Scarlett
Awesomeness.
A new story for me to read! I'm really glad I found this.
Awesomeness.
A new story for me to read! I'm really glad I found this.
2/27/2008 c8 3Passthedamham
Darn, I read this a long time ago and must've forgotten to review, sorry. But it's going great, update fast! Informative backstory.
3PassthedamhamDarn, I read this a long time ago and must've forgotten to review, sorry. But it's going great, update fast! Informative backstory.
12/31/2007 c8 3NajaMoonshadow
o...some history! Poor Zorg-still, if it hadna happened, he wouldn't be half as cool as he is *wink*, fantabulous chapter! Update again! Naja
3NajaMoonshadowo...some history! Poor Zorg-still, if it hadna happened, he wouldn't be half as cool as he is *wink*, fantabulous chapter! Update again! Naja
10/2/2007 c7 2Nahala Riddle
Okay, have Zorg's friend try to collect the bounty on him, then Zorg and Rakat flee back to earth being chased, and have him ask Corbon for help. That'll be a nice twist. Hope this helps!
2Nahala RiddleOkay, have Zorg's friend try to collect the bounty on him, then Zorg and Rakat flee back to earth being chased, and have him ask Corbon for help. That'll be a nice twist. Hope this helps!
9/27/2007 c4 Nahala Riddle
OMG! I have been looking for a 5th element story 4ever! I also have a thing for Zorg, too, so... Hehe. Good job!
OMG! I have been looking for a 5th element story 4ever! I also have a thing for Zorg, too, so... Hehe. Good job!
9/10/2007 c6 12Sweet A.K
This is great! There is not enough Zorg stories out there, and the ones that are out there are long abandoned. I hape you plan on Updateing this soon, because you have got me hooked!
Amanda
12Sweet A.KThis is great! There is not enough Zorg stories out there, and the ones that are out there are long abandoned. I hape you plan on Updateing this soon, because you have got me hooked!
Amanda
8/24/2007 c6 3Passthedamham
Zorg looks bizarre in my mind, but much different, so he can stay undercover. . . may I be so dumb to ask what an F-X War is?
3PassthedamhamZorg looks bizarre in my mind, but much different, so he can stay undercover. . . may I be so dumb to ask what an F-X War is?
7/19/2007 c5 Passthedamham
Rakat sounds like such a badass, and I think you're doing a very good job with writing her. Writing this will help you with your writing. Keep up the good work! :D
Rakat sounds like such a badass, and I think you're doing a very good job with writing her. Writing this will help you with your writing. Keep up the good work! :D
7/8/2007 c5 6BlackSparrow06
I love this story. Fa-la-la-la.
Well done on another fantastic chapter, many cookies for you and please update soon; I really need some more of this!
Kay x
6BlackSparrow06I love this story. Fa-la-la-la.
Well done on another fantastic chapter, many cookies for you and please update soon; I really need some more of this!
Kay x
7/6/2007 c5 3NajaMoonshadow
don't worry about how to write Rakat-i think she writes herself admirably *grins* your doing a fantastic job and updates can't come soon enough! WIshing a fast pen and a willing muse to you! Naja
3NajaMoonshadowdon't worry about how to write Rakat-i think she writes herself admirably *grins* your doing a fantastic job and updates can't come soon enough! WIshing a fast pen and a willing muse to you! Naja
6/22/2007 c4 NajaMoonshadow
Yay! You updated! Thank you! This is great, really! I've got no objections or comments other than to say I hope to see more! Your characters are dynamic and intersting, sitting at seats edge! Naja
Yay! You updated! Thank you! This is great, really! I've got no objections or comments other than to say I hope to see more! Your characters are dynamic and intersting, sitting at seats edge! Naja