for Ode to Christine7/30/2008 c1 
210Crystal Rose of Pollux
Oh, this is a beautiful poem! I love how you've portrayed Raoul's thoughts in this... like how he knows he'd do anything for Christine, and how she makes his life complete...
Very beautiful!
210Crystal Rose of PolluxOh, this is a beautiful poem! I love how you've portrayed Raoul's thoughts in this... like how he knows he'd do anything for Christine, and how she makes his life complete...
Very beautiful!
10/1/2007 c1 3Amai Melody
aww... the poem was nice! ^ _ ^ good job here have a muffin *tosses muffin at author* teehee? the cookies are mine... O _ O
3Amai Melodyaww... the poem was nice! ^ _ ^ good job here have a muffin *tosses muffin at author* teehee? the cookies are mine... O _ O
9/28/2007 c1 6Malacandra
Very nice poem. I like how you compare Christine's fictional experiences with everyday struggles between good and evil. I'm not the best judge of poetry, but I think this is very poetic and flows very nicely. Well done.
-Malacandra
6MalacandraVery nice poem. I like how you compare Christine's fictional experiences with everyday struggles between good and evil. I'm not the best judge of poetry, but I think this is very poetic and flows very nicely. Well done.
-Malacandra
8/1/2006 c1 KyrieofAccender
Cool! I wish I could write poetry like that. I've only ever written one decent poem in my life, and that was a continuation of Sam's poem about Gandalf's Fireworks, so it hardly counts. I like the relation between you and Christine - I always thought I could relate an awful lot to her, too.
~Kyrie
Cool! I wish I could write poetry like that. I've only ever written one decent poem in my life, and that was a continuation of Sam's poem about Gandalf's Fireworks, so it hardly counts. I like the relation between you and Christine - I always thought I could relate an awful lot to her, too.
~Kyrie
7/21/2006 c1 19Operatastic SuperSop
hey,
I just recently became a Phan-atic, and I was intrigued by your penname, so I read your poem. It's really good. surprisingly, we're actually a lot alike, except for the fact that you want Raoul and Christine to be together.
anyway, I like how you allude to Christ to come and save you and bring in clarity, and I like your word choice. cool :)
19Operatastic SuperSophey,
I just recently became a Phan-atic, and I was intrigued by your penname, so I read your poem. It's really good. surprisingly, we're actually a lot alike, except for the fact that you want Raoul and Christine to be together.
anyway, I like how you allude to Christ to come and save you and bring in clarity, and I like your word choice. cool :)