for Saiyan Princess of Kerinan7/19/2006 c1 
16ShadowPrincess-Shekailaia
Well, this is an interesting story, not unlike a story I was planning to type up after I finish my current series... Well, the beginning is similar anyway; the plot you seem to be coming on to is nothing like what I thought to type up... At least I don't have to worry about stealing ideas...
Anyway, this is an interesting beginning, though it leaves much to be known. This seems like it's going to be a good story, but please tell me that not all chapters will be this short! I'll look forward to your next chapter.
-Kai
16ShadowPrincess-ShekailaiaWell, this is an interesting story, not unlike a story I was planning to type up after I finish my current series... Well, the beginning is similar anyway; the plot you seem to be coming on to is nothing like what I thought to type up... At least I don't have to worry about stealing ideas...
Anyway, this is an interesting beginning, though it leaves much to be known. This seems like it's going to be a good story, but please tell me that not all chapters will be this short! I'll look forward to your next chapter.
-Kai