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1/24/2012 c3 6Milkater
Ok, sorry to sound like a downer, but I am a stickler for haiku so I need to point these out first:

1 - It is 5-7-5 not 7-5-7

2 - Even if it was 7-5-7, you still made mistakes:

Burning and angry like fire - 7

Is just fueling - 4

The flames of Hell itself - 6

Why can't my destiny - 6

Be clear as crystal - 5

Instead of dirty as mud - 7

Ok, now that is off my chest, the story itself is really good =) I really enjoy it so far, and will definitely be continuing... I just needed to point these out while it was fresh in my mind... I know we all make mistakes so I don't like it get to me... Anywho, you are a good writer with a style I enjoy reading =)
9/11/2007 c12 4CheshireCat19
please hurry!
8/27/2007 c1 10Zexion's.Emo.Queen
FWE!... just kinda noticed... Uh... therichnobody got my username wrong... but who cares! not me... srry, Sugar high... Mnwahahahahahahaha1!11!{1+Shift} ^^'
8/26/2007 c12 3Angel's Archer
I really love Xemnas' poem. And Xigbar's too. It's cool how you've put all these poems into a story, makes it more interesting.
8/7/2007 c12 therichnobody
(too lazy to sign in) Oh man, Xemnas' as to be by far the bst. ^^ Props to Zexion Emo Kid and you for even starting this yo! ^^ (pumps fist in air three times) GO MOONCRY! GO ZEXION EMO KID! Ohh~cean! ^^
8/7/2007 c5 BulletWitch-xoxo
zexys poem was cool. poor demy can't write.
8/7/2007 c12 9TurtleFeathers
Rather beautiful. Xemnas's was rather depressing... keeping writing, if you'd like. The poems are simple and beautiful, expressing each person/non-person.
4/13/2007 c2 1Mistaya's57Dice
yea... i hate to be a downer but haikus are 575 not 757 but it is still good!

~*WhisKey*~
4/7/2007 c10 Misszexion
Xi shots pierce the

nIght, and an

agGrivated sniper emerges.

an eBb in

a usuAl tide of life,

when a Raining shot pierces your heart.

Peace!
4/6/2007 c10 9TurtleFeathers
Tee-hee. ^_^ That was very humorous. :)
4/6/2007 c10 42therichnobody
Watch, I'm gonna be saying this rap all day.

Gambler,

Don’t gamble your time or you’ll be late

Rambler,

That’s why I’m called ‘The Gambler of Fate’

Gambler,

Just don’t put me in that card of a crate

My fav part. Yay you updated!
2/12/2007 c9 therichnobody
Aw *takes breath* w *faints, get splashed with water*

Cute. That was nice for marluxia. But it will never happen in my head.

Happy Valentine's!
2/11/2007 c9 3Caribbean Babe
Aww...-giggles- too kawaii! XD
2/11/2007 c9 xciv
aw... forbidden, non-existent nobody love...
2/10/2007 c9 9TurtleFeathers
Tee-hee, ^_^
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