for Alberich & Juelian9/25/2006 c13 
3Neverfall
Uh-oh...at least they're going to not be as angry all the time, now that the lifebond's slightly more settled...but still, the Healer's are going to have their hands full trying to keep them from killing each other! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
3NeverfallUh-oh...at least they're going to not be as angry all the time, now that the lifebond's slightly more settled...but still, the Healer's are going to have their hands full trying to keep them from killing each other! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
9/23/2006 c12 16LavenderStorm
Haha, the great weapons master Alberich not recognising a lifebond! And he's being played with and twisted around in your hands. The irony in it is simply dripping.
Oh, may I ask why Kantor did not tell him about the lifebond? He should know about it, shouldn't he?
16LavenderStormHaha, the great weapons master Alberich not recognising a lifebond! And he's being played with and twisted around in your hands. The irony in it is simply dripping.
Oh, may I ask why Kantor did not tell him about the lifebond? He should know about it, shouldn't he?
9/22/2006 c12 5Morguemama
Gr...this whole thing is getting frustrating! Please tell me they're going to meet in the next chapter. Please? With whip cream and a cherry on top? This was a good chapter!
5MorguemamaGr...this whole thing is getting frustrating! Please tell me they're going to meet in the next chapter. Please? With whip cream and a cherry on top? This was a good chapter!
9/22/2006 c12 3Neverfall
ARGH. They are both being stupid. Now they're feeling bad. Grr. Stupid people and their not-recognizing-lifebonds syndrome.
Feel proud! By writing this fanfic, you have caused me to decide to read Exile's Honor. I'm reading it right now!
And it's still not as awesome as FMA. The anime for that is the only thing that's as good, if not better than, the manga.
3NeverfallARGH. They are both being stupid. Now they're feeling bad. Grr. Stupid people and their not-recognizing-lifebonds syndrome.
Feel proud! By writing this fanfic, you have caused me to decide to read Exile's Honor. I'm reading it right now!
And it's still not as awesome as FMA. The anime for that is the only thing that's as good, if not better than, the manga.
9/17/2006 c11 Neverfall
Duhduhduhduh...NOW they'll finally meet! (Again.) I can't wait for it! Unless, of course, Juelian is asleep. But I do hope that they meet again in the next chapter. Update as soon as possible, please!
Duhduhduhduh...NOW they'll finally meet! (Again.) I can't wait for it! Unless, of course, Juelian is asleep. But I do hope that they meet again in the next chapter. Update as soon as possible, please!
9/15/2006 c10 1Dreamer of Tales
I just discovered this story. It is wonderful. An interesting idea. Please keep writing as I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
1Dreamer of TalesI just discovered this story. It is wonderful. An interesting idea. Please keep writing as I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
9/11/2006 c10 5Morguemama
The suspense is killing me! When are they going to meet? Good work with this chapter. I am greatly enjoying your tale.
5MorguemamaThe suspense is killing me! When are they going to meet? Good work with this chapter. I am greatly enjoying your tale.
9/11/2006 c10 3Neverfall
Well, Alberich is irritated. The Healer could have been a little more careful about asking the questions, in my opinion. Update soon, please, and make the next chapter longer!
3NeverfallWell, Alberich is irritated. The Healer could have been a little more careful about asking the questions, in my opinion. Update soon, please, and make the next chapter longer!
9/2/2006 c9 3Neverfall
I liked how you did the accent in the first part. I could almost hear the man's voice in my head when he spoke. Also, I like the mental dialoge (sp?) between Alberich and his Companion (can't remember his name right now...)
Hmm...nothing else much, except for the fact that I can't wait until you update again.
3NeverfallI liked how you did the accent in the first part. I could almost hear the man's voice in my head when he spoke. Also, I like the mental dialoge (sp?) between Alberich and his Companion (can't remember his name right now...)
Hmm...nothing else much, except for the fact that I can't wait until you update again.
9/2/2006 c9 16LavenderStorm
Ooh, intrigue and political manipulations! I love those! Hmm, but these are very difficult to bring off and even more so to pull off perfectly. I'll be waiting to see how you're going to do that :P
All the constant references to Alberich being lifebonded makes me drool. I'd like to read the circumstances under which Alberich meets his lifebonded again. Oh, and see his expression when he finally finds out that he is lifebonded... Ha ha!
I think Juelian is a very interesting woman. She has a strong character and a brilliant personality, although that is sullied by her penchance for crime. Certainly, she is a good match for Alberich. I'll be waiting to see how your story develops, update soon! :)
16LavenderStormOoh, intrigue and political manipulations! I love those! Hmm, but these are very difficult to bring off and even more so to pull off perfectly. I'll be waiting to see how you're going to do that :P
All the constant references to Alberich being lifebonded makes me drool. I'd like to read the circumstances under which Alberich meets his lifebonded again. Oh, and see his expression when he finally finds out that he is lifebonded... Ha ha!
I think Juelian is a very interesting woman. She has a strong character and a brilliant personality, although that is sullied by her penchance for crime. Certainly, she is a good match for Alberich. I'll be waiting to see how your story develops, update soon! :)