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5/2/2014 c1 kenkaofan
plzzz updateee
9/20/2006 c1 6RKgirl93
great story! Please update soon!
7/23/2006 c1 animebdoll
keep going this is going to be a good one i am so going to add it to my fav stories
7/23/2006 c1 gabyhyatt
kenji is his brother?
7/23/2006 c1 Anonymous but very interested
Wonderful beginning! I hope you'll update soon. This was a great start.

I like Kenshin and Kaoru very much as a pairing, but I hope that Tomoe won't be hurt too much. Maybe she'll find someone else? (By the way, will she feel worried or jealous that Kaoru's staying with Kenshin?)

When Kenshin's mother says, 'I've decided to give you the week off', I think you meant 'I've decided to give you the next two weeks off'. Where's Kenshin's dad?

How old are the characters? I was thinking that Kaoru's parents might be somewhat worried that she's staying over...but since their parents are acquainted, maybe not.

I hope you'll update soon!

Thanks for sharing this.

Good luck!

^_^

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