for Lost8/4/2009 c1 Coco
You voiced Brahne wonderfully. I could understand now why she acted the way she did, and everything made wonderful sense!
Reading this makes me feel bad for her choice, and I wish she could have lived longer and learned from her mistakes, but you worked it beautifully.
You are a wonderful writer.
:D
-Coco
You voiced Brahne wonderfully. I could understand now why she acted the way she did, and everything made wonderful sense!
Reading this makes me feel bad for her choice, and I wish she could have lived longer and learned from her mistakes, but you worked it beautifully.
You are a wonderful writer.
:D
-Coco
1/15/2009 c1 
16Myshu
Congrats for making Brahne into the tragic figure she's supposed to be, as well as giving a nice look into the rationalization behind her actions.
It's really hard to feel sympathy for a villain like her, even with Garnet in your party, but this almost got me tear'd up... just a lil'. Good read!
16MyshuCongrats for making Brahne into the tragic figure she's supposed to be, as well as giving a nice look into the rationalization behind her actions.
It's really hard to feel sympathy for a villain like her, even with Garnet in your party, but this almost got me tear'd up... just a lil'. Good read!
6/22/2001 c1 Bryguy
Hmmmm... who-could-it-be? Obviosly it's Queen Brahne. Oh well, its not like u were writing a this for the mystery. Personally, I dont see what the other reviewers love about this, but it was pretty good.
Hmmmm... who-could-it-be? Obviosly it's Queen Brahne. Oh well, its not like u were writing a this for the mystery. Personally, I dont see what the other reviewers love about this, but it was pretty good.
6/16/2001 c1 Neko-sama
That was a good story. I think that was Brahne telling the story. Am I right?
That was a good story. I think that was Brahne telling the story. Am I right?
6/7/2001 c1 Byrnstar
Actually, I love this fic just the way it is! If you do do a rewrite, would you keep this version available too?
Actually, I love this fic just the way it is! If you do do a rewrite, would you keep this version available too?
6/7/2001 c1 Nephalim CelesTerra
Great story! An unique idea I haven't seen yet. Just like Kuja, I never thought Queen Brahne was purely evil, it were the circumstances that made her do those terrible things...Anyway, keep up the good work!
Great story! An unique idea I haven't seen yet. Just like Kuja, I never thought Queen Brahne was purely evil, it were the circumstances that made her do those terrible things...Anyway, keep up the good work!
6/6/2001 c1 Whitney
Call me bias, but this was one of the most amazing things I've ever read, despite the fact I have no idea what you're talking about because I've only seen clips of the game it's still really good writing. Way to go Jane-a-thin, you did super-dee-duper I liked it a lot!
Call me bias, but this was one of the most amazing things I've ever read, despite the fact I have no idea what you're talking about because I've only seen clips of the game it's still really good writing. Way to go Jane-a-thin, you did super-dee-duper I liked it a lot!
6/5/2001 c1 Cathy Kawaii
Very beautiful
Very beautiful
6/5/2001 c1 8Lake Desire
You captured the feelings of the Queen well. I like fics that are written in the present tense. This shows how the queen justified trying to kill Garnet, and why she felt guilty over it. Good job!
8Lake DesireYou captured the feelings of the Queen well. I like fics that are written in the present tense. This shows how the queen justified trying to kill Garnet, and why she felt guilty over it. Good job!
6/5/2001 c1 Amanda the mighty
OHMIGOD! a bhrane ficc... and I like it too! Srage things happens
OHMIGOD! a bhrane ficc... and I like it too! Srage things happens