for The Great Lion War10/18/2012 c2 NikaPalmer
I wanna read more, when are you gonna update? I just finished reading and I already love this story :)
I wanna read more, when are you gonna update? I just finished reading and I already love this story :)
10/4/2006 c2 
9MinisterSweetGoodKid
Another wonderful chapter. I loved it. Heh, why do you think I'm reviewing? Adina's family sure is nice and caring towards Jelani. His father seems to be very evil. He makes a great bad guy.
I love what you call your chapters.
Something tells me you found from 'He Lives In You' the longer version from 'The Lion King II: Simba's Pride' right?
Well done. My reviews might help and bring some inspriation to you. I hope so.
If you have any questions email me at: or at my hotmail:
Okay? Take good care. Please write more.
9MinisterSweetGoodKidAnother wonderful chapter. I loved it. Heh, why do you think I'm reviewing? Adina's family sure is nice and caring towards Jelani. His father seems to be very evil. He makes a great bad guy.
I love what you call your chapters.
Something tells me you found from 'He Lives In You' the longer version from 'The Lion King II: Simba's Pride' right?
Well done. My reviews might help and bring some inspriation to you. I hope so.
If you have any questions email me at: or at my hotmail:
Okay? Take good care. Please write more.
10/4/2006 c1 MinisterSweetGoodKid
This was a sad yet good chapter. So Jelani is blind? How sad. Glad that Adina found him and takes him to her pride. Something tells me his father is planning something.
Anyway excellent start.
This was a sad yet good chapter. So Jelani is blind? How sad. Glad that Adina found him and takes him to her pride. Something tells me his father is planning something.
Anyway excellent start.