for Glass Mirror8/12/2015 c12 Full moon wolf
AHHHH WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO BE SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!? ITS 12:30 IN THE MORING AND I CANT STOP READING WHYYYYYYYYYY CLIFFHANGERS!
AHHHH WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO BE SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!? ITS 12:30 IN THE MORING AND I CANT STOP READING WHYYYYYYYYYY CLIFFHANGERS!
2/16/2015 c11 Guest
Ghost laidy and freak show
Ghost laidy and freak show
5/29/2013 c1 licorice
Nice stories, but I spotted a few flaws.
It is a bit rushed. I lost myself a few times and you didn't exactly note every time the scene changes. A bit more description, thank you very much; when I read the stories the background is BLANK and if I don't know the characters they will be too! (Please do not get offended... I'm serious please don't)
The characters don't really have any depth. The actions aren't well described and there is too much talking; not enough actions. And no offense, but there is this cool invention created called a FULL STOP. Use it in sentences, please?
Meh, I guessed that's all... but I'm only commenting on the first chapter, so you'll probably improve! _...
YOU BETTER BE BUNNY!
Nice stories, but I spotted a few flaws.
It is a bit rushed. I lost myself a few times and you didn't exactly note every time the scene changes. A bit more description, thank you very much; when I read the stories the background is BLANK and if I don't know the characters they will be too! (Please do not get offended... I'm serious please don't)
The characters don't really have any depth. The actions aren't well described and there is too much talking; not enough actions. And no offense, but there is this cool invention created called a FULL STOP. Use it in sentences, please?
Meh, I guessed that's all... but I'm only commenting on the first chapter, so you'll probably improve! _...
YOU BETTER BE BUNNY!
9/24/2012 c28 
26XxXNightcoreQueenXxX
I just gotta ask why is this story DISCONTINUED? you had it going pretty well!
26XxXNightcoreQueenXxXI just gotta ask why is this story DISCONTINUED? you had it going pretty well!
9/23/2012 c18 XxXNightcoreQueenXxX
somewhere Vlad spits out his tea at that statement!
Oh Jack, HAHAHAHAHA!
somewhere Vlad spits out his tea at that statement!
Oh Jack, HAHAHAHAHA!
4/21/2012 c28 19Goshenite45
Shame you left this story without a endding,but i am just glad it didn't end with something dramactic.
19Goshenite45Shame you left this story without a endding,but i am just glad it didn't end with something dramactic.
11/10/2010 c28 Kate Dradion Black
xD LIKE This!
Haha, Moare
Whoa :O I'm really Glad, That Youre Having A 'Lil 'Party'
Lol, Btw I Guess That Danny Lykes It? (Good Luck To Phantom, He Ain't Gonna Survive)
Uhh, MOARE!
Gr8 Story :D
It's Really Soo Ah-Mazing!
xD LIKE This!
Haha, Moare
Whoa :O I'm really Glad, That Youre Having A 'Lil 'Party'
Lol, Btw I Guess That Danny Lykes It? (Good Luck To Phantom, He Ain't Gonna Survive)
Uhh, MOARE!
Gr8 Story :D
It's Really Soo Ah-Mazing!
2/2/2009 c28 KH2fanatic
The story idea's very good and it's an interesting idea and pairing. I would recomend getting a beta though as there's quite a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes. It's also a bit long winded with somethings that the fic might have been better without. Good story idea but i would recomend getting a beta to edit it and also keeping ANs to the end or start.
The story idea's very good and it's an interesting idea and pairing. I would recomend getting a beta though as there's quite a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes. It's also a bit long winded with somethings that the fic might have been better without. Good story idea but i would recomend getting a beta to edit it and also keeping ANs to the end or start.
12/28/2007 c28 40Kid9535
Hahah...discontinued eh? Well, nice plot, very long winded and full of whiny fangirlish ideas. Especially the chatroom. You have no idea how much I craved to just grab the whole thing and edit it. You consistently placed the upper case incorrectly. Even though you don't have a beta...you should have word check right? Or not... Man, I wanted to see the end of this. Amongst all the long-windedness, oocness, plot-holes and random fillers as well as your fangirlish fetishes...the development was actualyl coming along quite well. But you should've cut off all that random OOC A/N convos. Quite inappropriate. The lime was very interesting though. But the random bracketted A/Ns really spoiled the mood. Plus expressions such as XD or o.O are really, weird unless you're aiming for a really random crack fic. SOrry I've waited so long to review this, I had to read the whole thing first. I do get annoyed with your OCs, they're just weird.
40Kid9535Hahah...discontinued eh? Well, nice plot, very long winded and full of whiny fangirlish ideas. Especially the chatroom. You have no idea how much I craved to just grab the whole thing and edit it. You consistently placed the upper case incorrectly. Even though you don't have a beta...you should have word check right? Or not... Man, I wanted to see the end of this. Amongst all the long-windedness, oocness, plot-holes and random fillers as well as your fangirlish fetishes...the development was actualyl coming along quite well. But you should've cut off all that random OOC A/N convos. Quite inappropriate. The lime was very interesting though. But the random bracketted A/Ns really spoiled the mood. Plus expressions such as XD or o.O are really, weird unless you're aiming for a really random crack fic. SOrry I've waited so long to review this, I had to read the whole thing first. I do get annoyed with your OCs, they're just weird.
5/21/2007 c28 33Hamtaro23
I totally don't understand Danny Phantom, but my my aren't you a naughty little girl? XD
And yes, fine, I was expecting lemon, XD.
I read through most of the chapters, I don't get any of the stuff, who the heck is Tucker? lol But anyways, that last chapter, lol. ;P Naughty, naughty.
And yeah, it's like...three. XD Anyways...
33Hamtaro23I totally don't understand Danny Phantom, but my my aren't you a naughty little girl? XD
And yes, fine, I was expecting lemon, XD.
I read through most of the chapters, I don't get any of the stuff, who the heck is Tucker? lol But anyways, that last chapter, lol. ;P Naughty, naughty.
And yeah, it's like...three. XD Anyways...
2/9/2007 c28 narugirl94
hi... umm... i'm 2 lazy 2 sign in, so I figured, hey... why not write another review?
XD
well, I don't mind that you're not updating, but WE MISS YOU!
Kyuu: ... we?
Jennie: YES! WE!
hi... umm... i'm 2 lazy 2 sign in, so I figured, hey... why not write another review?
XD
well, I don't mind that you're not updating, but WE MISS YOU!
Kyuu: ... we?
Jennie: YES! WE!
1/13/2007 c27 Tiki-Musicanova
-doesn't know where else to reply-
hmm..Try sending an email to fanfiction about this, they should know what to do. D
-doesn't know where else to reply-
hmm..Try sending an email to fanfiction about this, they should know what to do. D
1/13/2007 c28 2Tiki Musicanova
Holy @#$#@ I LOVE THIS STORY. WW ~
Idk what else to say...cept your story ROCKS.
2Tiki MusicanovaHoly @#$#@ I LOVE THIS STORY. WW ~
Idk what else to say...cept your story ROCKS.
11/7/2006 c28 Peaches-Destroyer
YAY! AN UPDATE! (srry bout the late review, mi comp was broken)
i STILL adore this story!
DANNI! YAY! *cheers*
YAY! AN UPDATE! (srry bout the late review, mi comp was broken)
i STILL adore this story!
DANNI! YAY! *cheers*