
8/12/2023 c1
2bramscan92
wow, at first i dough that story about children of harry potter will be good, i mean look at 'HPCC'
i come here for luna story but i enjoy the children story.

wow, at first i dough that story about children of harry potter will be good, i mean look at 'HPCC'
i come here for luna story but i enjoy the children story.
3/31/2020 c1 Guest
I m happy Fred is alive..
I m happy Fred is alive..
11/8/2015 c10
2GodricGeoffreyGryffindor
I don't normally read younger generation Potterverse stories, but I'm glad I read this one. I'll add it to my favorites and my C2.

I don't normally read younger generation Potterverse stories, but I'm glad I read this one. I'll add it to my favorites and my C2.
11/8/2015 c7 GodricGeoffreyGryffindor
Hedwig is female, so it would be impossible for her to be a great-grandfather.
Hedwig is female, so it would be impossible for her to be a great-grandfather.
3/26/2015 c10 Dave210
Well, its a better story that its prequel, which was way too fluffy for me. Too bad that you have to read it to understand this one properly.
One bit of criticism here. The character "Madam Finnegan" is introduced in Chapter 2. Now I figured that she was someone recognizable from canon who married Shemus. But we don't learn who she is until Chapter 7. (caution slight spoiler) And you would think that a boy with an Irish father and a Chinese mother would have a bit different look to him (not that it's a bad thing), but that is never addressed.
Well, its a better story that its prequel, which was way too fluffy for me. Too bad that you have to read it to understand this one properly.
One bit of criticism here. The character "Madam Finnegan" is introduced in Chapter 2. Now I figured that she was someone recognizable from canon who married Shemus. But we don't learn who she is until Chapter 7. (caution slight spoiler) And you would think that a boy with an Irish father and a Chinese mother would have a bit different look to him (not that it's a bad thing), but that is never addressed.
5/2/2014 c2 Kyle
The word is rather you wrote weather .Try spellcheck.
The word is rather you wrote weather .Try spellcheck.
5/4/2014 c10 Talrond
The end? Talk about a short story.
Only ten chapters?
Were you afraid you was gonna be late for Supper?lol
The end? Talk about a short story.
Only ten chapters?
Were you afraid you was gonna be late for Supper?lol
5/3/2014 c8 Talrond
Actually the Weasley family is the purest Magical Family as it goes back 22 generations.
While the Blacks and Malfoy familys only go back 15 & 18 generations.
Actually the Weasley family is the purest Magical Family as it goes back 22 generations.
While the Blacks and Malfoy familys only go back 15 & 18 generations.
3/19/2014 c10 Hoshihime08
Good job! 13 hours and a severe lack of sleep later, you have managed to keep me entertained with both this story and it's predecessor. Both stories were well written, even if there were some glaring spelling errors. Overall, both stories were wonderfully creative works.
Good job! 13 hours and a severe lack of sleep later, you have managed to keep me entertained with both this story and it's predecessor. Both stories were well written, even if there were some glaring spelling errors. Overall, both stories were wonderfully creative works.
6/14/2013 c10 Emerald Green-Heart
Are you going to post Lizzie's second year? Please do! Your stories are really good! I honestly think that your J.K Rowling's double!
Are you going to post Lizzie's second year? Please do! Your stories are really good! I honestly think that your J.K Rowling's double!