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1/15/2007 c14 1charmedgrl4ever
konban wa

Aw ... That doesn't even begin to cover it. Cole is the sweetest father ever! I have a question, though: Are the baby-orbs in the shape of a baby or just a blob of orbs?

OMG - Cole is so LOVING! He's SO sweet! *sniffle* I wanted to cry this chappie, seriously! *sigh* Back to the "joys" of reality ... Please update soon so that I can be sucked into this fictional world again asap! I NEED IMAGINATION TO SAVE ME FROM SCHOOL! And my brain is too fried to think, so can you please do the thinking for me? *wink* I can't wait to read the next chappie - gute nacht

Khudafis

-Shan-
1/15/2007 c13 142WelshCanuck
Great fic. I just read it all well all thats there anyway. And i wont kill you for such a Coop/Phoebe chatper I like them together
1/15/2007 c13 fanlay
great story, i wonder if i'll get to see more of paige and henry, i really love them together..

hope you update soon!
1/14/2007 c13 2bunn2007
i like this story. i was thinking to myself that i hadn't been reading much of chamred anymore and i should start again. so this was a good one. i really did like the coop vs cole thing and that coop won. like i LOVE cole and i think he and phoebe really were meant to be, but after so long...and coop (although he was rushed at the end of 8th...) does make phoebe happy and his name starts with a C. so i think anything post 8th needs to be ph/coo and you did well with it. i personally reccomend ending this story here. you've tied things up and given it a real ending but there is some openings to be played with. and if you play those cards right, then you could possibly spin it ph/col.
1/14/2007 c9 1charmedgrl4ever
konban wa

So I decided to take a look since I had time tonight, and I must say I'm surprised. I'm really not very into fics that are about the sisters' love-lives, but this has a really cool plot. It really held my attention. What surprised me more is that I usually have a hard time reading this type - the screenplay type - since it's all just dialogue. I have a hard time keeping focused when it's written that way. I don't know how you did it, but you really kepy my attention! The plot was great, and I can't wait to finish reading - unfortunately, a girl's gotta sleep *sigh* I'll continue tomorrow, hopefully. Talk to you soon! Gute nacht

Khudafis

Besitos

-Shan-
1/14/2007 c13 bajacks
Glad that you're back. Can't wait for the next update. Although, I can't help hoping that it will be Phoebe and Cole in the end.
1/6/2007 c12 Joka Popcorn
I love this story it is so real and intense. i cnt wait 4 der next chapter. plzz update soon.
12/26/2006 c12 12Melinda Turner Halliwell
too bad you can't write this anytime soon.

but i trully understand you, school is so hard.

anyway hope to read an update soon!

Bye!
12/7/2006 c12 5AshaXxX
I wish you all the best and hope you will come back soon

Thanks again for your wonderfull story I enjoyed every second
12/7/2006 c12 9stuffoholic
Happy Holidays!

I can't wait for you to come back and keep writing the story
12/5/2006 c12 Truth Is What You Make Of It
understandable

if your going to be coming back within a month then its not that big of a deal most writers take longer than that 2 write a chapter
11/4/2006 c11 8AngelicRose8
This is beautiful!

I hope it ends with Pheobe/Cole together.
10/30/2006 c11 14AnimeAlexis
Ok, see that's not fair. You can't just leave it there! Update soon please!
10/29/2006 c11 82The Outlaw Witch
Great story so far and I hate *glares* cliffhangers! I want to know what happens!
10/29/2006 c11 Truth Is What You Make Of It
THIS IS SO SAD

I STILL THINK SHE WAS MEANT TO BE WITH COLE AND THE ONLY REASON THE ELDERS SENT SUPID WAS BECAUSE HE HAS THE POWER OF LOVE AND HES BASICALLY CAUSING HER TO FEEL THAT LOVE FOR HIM A FALSE LOVE
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