
12/19/2006 c1
2Emby
w00tness.
This is awesome. =D
Makes me happy to see some arguing again.
...
Well, not really.
But that's okay!
Keep updating!
♥-Emby

w00tness.
This is awesome. =D
Makes me happy to see some arguing again.
...
Well, not really.
But that's okay!
Keep updating!
♥-Emby
11/12/2006 c1 nyrocat
This is really great! ^_^ I have to comment on how you do diologe. How people usally do it is
"hi." Kyo mumbled quietly to the girl he finnally admited he had a crush on. at least to his self...
"sup?" Uo replied casually.
See? lol, yeah, mostly people try to use the " instead of '. just a tip! ^_^
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-Nyrocat.
(PS. Thanks for reviewing on my story! ~
This is really great! ^_^ I have to comment on how you do diologe. How people usally do it is
"hi." Kyo mumbled quietly to the girl he finnally admited he had a crush on. at least to his self...
"sup?" Uo replied casually.
See? lol, yeah, mostly people try to use the " instead of '. just a tip! ^_^
~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~
-Nyrocat.
(PS. Thanks for reviewing on my story! ~
10/11/2006 c1
4rider-of-snakes
I really liked this story! I can't wait to read more...there is going to be more, right? I NEED MORE!

I really liked this story! I can't wait to read more...there is going to be more, right? I NEED MORE!
9/23/2006 c1
65MinervaEvenstar
That was so funny! Everyone was so in character it could have been part of the actual anime! My fave part was: "Shigure couldn't contain himself. His laughter was barely suppressed by sheer shock! 'Well, it's obvious our sweet impressionable Tohru has been influenced by such careless and roughish men that she has simply lost her innocence!'"

That was so funny! Everyone was so in character it could have been part of the actual anime! My fave part was: "Shigure couldn't contain himself. His laughter was barely suppressed by sheer shock! 'Well, it's obvious our sweet impressionable Tohru has been influenced by such careless and roughish men that she has simply lost her innocence!'"
8/8/2006 c1
14AssassinedAngel
You should add more! yay! this was Kawaii! loved it!
~Yukiluver, Michelle~

You should add more! yay! this was Kawaii! loved it!
~Yukiluver, Michelle~
8/8/2006 c1
1DesirePassion
This was just fine, I really liked it. I'm writing my first FB fanfic as well so I understand.
This fanfic sounded so official like it could be part of the actual manga. You did a great job! ^_^

This was just fine, I really liked it. I'm writing my first FB fanfic as well so I understand.
This fanfic sounded so official like it could be part of the actual manga. You did a great job! ^_^
8/7/2006 c1
3lockawayheart
Aw...your first FB story...it was really funny to read. I like this one. Good luck with more stories!

Aw...your first FB story...it was really funny to read. I like this one. Good luck with more stories!