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9/3/2008 c1 5mermaidharmony
OMG TOHRU SWORE!
2/16/2007 c1 7kyozmine
:D this is so cute! ^_^ I love it! ;P
12/19/2006 c1 2Emby
w00tness.

This is awesome. =D

Makes me happy to see some arguing again.

...

Well, not really.

But that's okay!

Keep updating!

♥-Emby
11/12/2006 c1 nyrocat
This is really great! ^_^ I have to comment on how you do diologe. How people usally do it is

"hi." Kyo mumbled quietly to the girl he finnally admited he had a crush on. at least to his self...

"sup?" Uo replied casually.

See? lol, yeah, mostly people try to use the " instead of '. just a tip! ^_^

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-Nyrocat.

(PS. Thanks for reviewing on my story! ~
10/11/2006 c1 4rider-of-snakes
I really liked this story! I can't wait to read more...there is going to be more, right? I NEED MORE!
9/23/2006 c1 65MinervaEvenstar
That was so funny! Everyone was so in character it could have been part of the actual anime! My fave part was: "Shigure couldn't contain himself. His laughter was barely suppressed by sheer shock! 'Well, it's obvious our sweet impressionable Tohru has been influenced by such careless and roughish men that she has simply lost her innocence!'"
9/17/2006 c1 3Singinsorrow
I liked it, it was kinda like drabble. I liked it. Good job ^^
9/11/2006 c1 118Teh Future Mrs. Kyo Sohma
Tohru's been listening to Kyo too much!

xD!

~Dukoro-chan
8/21/2006 c1 hpbooklover4ever
I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW!
8/14/2006 c1 5charlie-becks
lol tohru swearin thats great :)
8/8/2006 c1 14AssassinedAngel
You should add more! yay! this was Kawaii! loved it!

~Yukiluver, Michelle~
8/8/2006 c1 1DesirePassion
This was just fine, I really liked it. I'm writing my first FB fanfic as well so I understand.

This fanfic sounded so official like it could be part of the actual manga. You did a great job! ^_^
8/7/2006 c1 3lockawayheart
Aw...your first FB story...it was really funny to read. I like this one. Good luck with more stories!

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