for Naruto: Hands Of Destiny9/17 c36 
4JosElynne
I’m blaming you on my allergies acting up. *sniiiff* my allergies made me ugly cry.
4JosElynneI’m blaming you on my allergies acting up. *sniiiff* my allergies made me ugly cry.
9/5/2022 c2 Samuel Henderson
Damn just 2 chapters in and I’m crying for some reason…good story so far.
Damn just 2 chapters in and I’m crying for some reason…good story so far.
2/26/2022 c11 1TBNRAtlan
goddammit Naruto you could have at least spent your last moments with Sakura or you could have told her and rejected her
1TBNRAtlangoddammit Naruto you could have at least spent your last moments with Sakura or you could have told her and rejected her
8/24/2021 c11 Guest
dude you ruin the emotional moments with arigatou instead of thanks. Great story tho ;)
dude you ruin the emotional moments with arigatou instead of thanks. Great story tho ;)
8/23/2021 c6 Guest
I mean can u imagine sooo many Naruto clones continuously popping up to talk to Kurama. Like how pissed off and grumpy Kurama would be. I find it freakin hilarious!
I mean can u imagine sooo many Naruto clones continuously popping up to talk to Kurama. Like how pissed off and grumpy Kurama would be. I find it freakin hilarious!
8/22/2021 c13 Miizzllaneous
Definitely your writing has improved, I'm glad to see this process despite it being a decade and a half since this came out. It's interesting. You're quite good at writing the romance. Although I'd personally change a couple sentences here and there on Sakuras part since she says "Baka" wayyy too much, I think you've done a good job with it.
Definitely your writing has improved, I'm glad to see this process despite it being a decade and a half since this came out. It's interesting. You're quite good at writing the romance. Although I'd personally change a couple sentences here and there on Sakuras part since she says "Baka" wayyy too much, I think you've done a good job with it.
8/22/2021 c7 Miizzllaneous
Honestly I've been trying to ignore it, I know this is rather old and the author probably won't see this or pay any mind let alone knowledge this short review/comment but I'll write this anythings. For a better reading experience and a more coherent story you should probably edit out the "Nani?!" and "Arigatou" even "Ero-Sensei" frankly doesn't really fit... For example "Ero-Sensei" already has it's counterpart "Pervy Sage". Really the honorific are the only thing that makes sense, for example Naruto calling the calling the Sandiame, "Jiji" is fitting. Honourifics are fine to retain like "Kakashi-Sensei" but the "Nani" and stuff seems kinda uh... Cringe? Oh and defiantly out of all of those the "Baka" is the worse. "Dobe" can easily be replaced with "Smartass" just as the former can be replaced with "Idiot" or "Stupid". Albeit I know this was made in 2006 so there's nothing I can really do, perhaps things were different back then within the anime community... What do I know? I was literally just barely one years old back then.
Honestly I've been trying to ignore it, I know this is rather old and the author probably won't see this or pay any mind let alone knowledge this short review/comment but I'll write this anythings. For a better reading experience and a more coherent story you should probably edit out the "Nani?!" and "Arigatou" even "Ero-Sensei" frankly doesn't really fit... For example "Ero-Sensei" already has it's counterpart "Pervy Sage". Really the honorific are the only thing that makes sense, for example Naruto calling the calling the Sandiame, "Jiji" is fitting. Honourifics are fine to retain like "Kakashi-Sensei" but the "Nani" and stuff seems kinda uh... Cringe? Oh and defiantly out of all of those the "Baka" is the worse. "Dobe" can easily be replaced with "Smartass" just as the former can be replaced with "Idiot" or "Stupid". Albeit I know this was made in 2006 so there's nothing I can really do, perhaps things were different back then within the anime community... What do I know? I was literally just barely one years old back then.
6/23/2021 c5 Guest
While the idea is interesting, all of the characters in this story sound the same. They’re all really dumb. A lot of scenes could do with some deletion. The writing is just really bad, overall.
While the idea is interesting, all of the characters in this story sound the same. They’re all really dumb. A lot of scenes could do with some deletion. The writing is just really bad, overall.
2/4/2021 c36 Harshil
A very well written story and a perfect ending.
A very well written story and a perfect ending.
1/11/2021 c36 Sasa
They got married! And Ryu-kun is so cute!
They got married! And Ryu-kun is so cute!