for A Change in things4/8/2009 c5 XoRinoX
Well at least you provided an acceptable answer, but you need to do it fast, because I see awesome potential in this fanfic, and I am far too impatient for my own good. XP
Well at least you provided an acceptable answer, but you need to do it fast, because I see awesome potential in this fanfic, and I am far too impatient for my own good. XP
7/21/2008 c1 
4Blackrose74
Reply to Chocolate Eyed
xD a 2 year late reply lol sorry bout that!Um well it originally was a PxS(thanks to my simple 14 year old mind) but I might have to change that now because I can't remember the full details because I lost my notepad with the plotlines in it
Reply to hentai18ancilla
Ok will do!Well try to do anyway,there isn't that much tears in it *reads fic* or is there? xD
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THANK YOU!For reviewing that is.At first I was just going to leave this story but since you all love it,I'mma continue it soon!
4Blackrose74Reply to Chocolate Eyed
xD a 2 year late reply lol sorry bout that!Um well it originally was a PxS(thanks to my simple 14 year old mind) but I might have to change that now because I can't remember the full details because I lost my notepad with the plotlines in it
Reply to hentai18ancilla
Ok will do!Well try to do anyway,there isn't that much tears in it *reads fic* or is there? xD
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THANK YOU!For reviewing that is.At first I was just going to leave this story but since you all love it,I'mma continue it soon!
8/28/2006 c4 1Chocolate Eyed
is this going to be a PS? coz if it is then tell me now so that i dont read any more coz i h8 Paul i h8 him so much sorry 2 all u Paul luvas out thea.i hope that Jesse really is her otha half
1Chocolate Eyedis this going to be a PS? coz if it is then tell me now so that i dont read any more coz i h8 Paul i h8 him so much sorry 2 all u Paul luvas out thea.i hope that Jesse really is her otha half
8/26/2006 c3 zxcvnm
OMG! I can't believe Susannah doesn't love Jesse! MY WORLD CAME CRASHING DOWN! GOHD, I HOPE THEY DOn't break up!
OMG! I can't believe Susannah doesn't love Jesse! MY WORLD CAME CRASHING DOWN! GOHD, I HOPE THEY DOn't break up!
8/21/2006 c3 Chocolate Eyed
Sergeantlover91 is right. This is so evil.
Stay True to the book! Be with Jesse! Love him for is Jesse/Queridaness unless your a Paul lover (which i have nothing against apart fomr the fact that its Wrong Wrong WRONG!)
sorry if this upsets you but to me its true. But update i wana see what happens *Gives evil eyes* and make it good.
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Keep it up! (the Susie kewlness not da Paul)UPDATE!
Emerald
Sergeantlover91 is right. This is so evil.
Stay True to the book! Be with Jesse! Love him for is Jesse/Queridaness unless your a Paul lover (which i have nothing against apart fomr the fact that its Wrong Wrong WRONG!)
sorry if this upsets you but to me its true. But update i wana see what happens *Gives evil eyes* and make it good.
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Keep it up! (the Susie kewlness not da Paul)UPDATE!
Emerald
8/17/2006 c2 108wanderlustlights
aw! sorry, i just really love Paul and he seems really sweet in this story...update soon! love it!
~trinatwilight11
108wanderlustlightsaw! sorry, i just really love Paul and he seems really sweet in this story...update soon! love it!
~trinatwilight11
8/17/2006 c2 I.Admire.Meyer
I LOVE THIS STORY! pretty please with a million cherries on top, contine!
I LOVE THIS STORY! pretty please with a million cherries on top, contine!
8/17/2006 c2 11xBxAxMx
this is soo evil? jesse is the wrong guy? no way! paul cannot be 'the other half'! o well...good story. update soon please!
11xBxAxMxthis is soo evil? jesse is the wrong guy? no way! paul cannot be 'the other half'! o well...good story. update soon please!
8/14/2006 c1 4hotapps
This is good. I would just like the chapters to be a bit longer. But good job. update soon.
4hotappsThis is good. I would just like the chapters to be a bit longer. But good job. update soon.
8/12/2006 c1 11Sweetly Sarcastic
well, if she isn't meant for jesse, can i have him?
anyway, this is a good start, but (this will make me sound like a gramar teacher), you need to look at your verb tenses. just a suggestion. overall, though, this is decent
11Sweetly Sarcasticwell, if she isn't meant for jesse, can i have him?
anyway, this is a good start, but (this will make me sound like a gramar teacher), you need to look at your verb tenses. just a suggestion. overall, though, this is decent