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11/29/2014 c1 23Mr.obviouse
;)
11/5/2014 c1 marcusedwards411
nice and sweet could add more chapters
9/25/2014 c1 Please make more
It was beautiful please make another chapter!
9/18/2014 c1 LW12
nice
5/12/2014 c1 marcus.edwards.3323
wow that was great and intense
10/1/2011 c1 You gonna make biscuits
Good story but what's with the balloons?
7/5/2011 c1 Kingdom of fairly odd Hearts
WHY IN GODZ NAME DID YOU PUT TIMMY IN SORAZ OUTFIT FROM KINGDOM HEARTZ 2!
6/9/2010 c1 1Suffern187
Ok I'm not trying to tell you how to do your job son...

Only at the start of the story was great.

When I got to the middle. What they was saying and doing was ja stupid and by reading this...it doesn't seem like you had sex before. This wasnt' writen to good.
3/10/2008 c1 5Georgina of Dragons
Nice.
10/11/2007 c1 Da Who
Interesting, but I think it might need a little more detail. Good plot! :)
4/28/2007 c1 anon
I don't really get the baloon thing other than watching Tootie buck around on it, but I really liked this
3/15/2007 c1 33spangladesh920
Excellent story friend! It was great from start to finish. Nice pick on the song at the end!

-Spangladesh
2/17/2007 c1 6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
That was great. It was so cute! I loved it!
12/15/2006 c1 Soontobemoved
Great story! and I love that song! although it was a little to mushy for me, It was a great story! *gives you cookie*

btw,it's me jewelflower :)
11/13/2006 c1 4DemonSlayer412
good story...but tootie und timmy are only ten!

Over all i liked it! I'd give it a 7 out of 10. P.S. Pirates of the caribeanen is One of my favorite movies!-Demon Slayer
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