for Good Luck7/15/2007 c1 Griselda
Great first chapter. I'd love to see this continued. Your English is great btw. I'd offer to beta your story, but English isn't my first language either.
Great first chapter. I'd love to see this continued. Your English is great btw. I'd offer to beta your story, but English isn't my first language either.
1/23/2007 c1 general tsos chicken
this seems like it could be the start of a great story. I think that you have the necessary background information all set up, but could go into a little more detail, about his stay in the cell and the books that he has trained with.
this seems like it could be the start of a great story. I think that you have the necessary background information all set up, but could go into a little more detail, about his stay in the cell and the books that he has trained with.
10/31/2006 c1 Knives
Good chapter. I like the idea.. Never seen it done before, never thought of it before to be completely honest. Looking forward to the next chapter. And I must say, compared to most authors on ffnet, you're not really in need of a beta..
Good chapter. I like the idea.. Never seen it done before, never thought of it before to be completely honest. Looking forward to the next chapter. And I must say, compared to most authors on ffnet, you're not really in need of a beta..
10/13/2006 c1 EnsignChocolateSauce
You get a BETA yet?
I'd gladly do it.
I love this idea!
And for English not being your native tongue, I only noticed one error.
You once said '...to great...', when the 'to' should've been 'too'. But we all make those mistakes. I was rather surprised when you said that, because I thought you were a great writer!
You get a BETA yet?
I'd gladly do it.
I love this idea!
And for English not being your native tongue, I only noticed one error.
You once said '...to great...', when the 'to' should've been 'too'. But we all make those mistakes. I was rather surprised when you said that, because I thought you were a great writer!
10/9/2006 c1 thesagerk
amazing - really amazing - absolutely fantastic - please please update soon...love ur fic...
amazing - really amazing - absolutely fantastic - please please update soon...love ur fic...
10/5/2006 c1 
2PersonaJXT
This is an interesting beginning. First time I've read a story where Dumbledore impersonates Harry Potter. Keep up the good work and update soon please!
2PersonaJXTThis is an interesting beginning. First time I've read a story where Dumbledore impersonates Harry Potter. Keep up the good work and update soon please!
9/7/2006 c1 13Manatheron
Hmm, Excellent story, I personally didn't find an abnormal amount of spelling or dication errors, so I would have to say you did a very good job, Expecally if English is not your primary language, But if you really want help, I am willing to Beta for you.
13ManatheronHmm, Excellent story, I personally didn't find an abnormal amount of spelling or dication errors, so I would have to say you did a very good job, Expecally if English is not your primary language, But if you really want help, I am willing to Beta for you.
9/7/2006 c1 psykco
good story
would be helpful if you made a more clear distinction between the real harry and the fake harry
good story
would be helpful if you made a more clear distinction between the real harry and the fake harry
9/3/2006 c1 1zafaran
This is a very interesting beginning to what looks like a very interesting story. I can't wait to find out what happens next, and if Dumbledore will get proper punishment for what he's done to Harry. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
1zafaranThis is a very interesting beginning to what looks like a very interesting story. I can't wait to find out what happens next, and if Dumbledore will get proper punishment for what he's done to Harry. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
9/3/2006 c1 12Hedwig Edwiges
English is my second language too, so no offer for beta, but I want to leave here all encouragement you might need to go forth with this story. Quite an interesting beginning! I hope for more soon.
12Hedwig EdwigesEnglish is my second language too, so no offer for beta, but I want to leave here all encouragement you might need to go forth with this story. Quite an interesting beginning! I hope for more soon.
8/25/2006 c1 YOurStorySucks
Its too confusing, like monkey shit and dog piss blended together. JUst quit writing, this sucks.
You mashed what should have been like 20 chapters in one clusterfuck. Rewrite it plz.
Its too confusing, like monkey shit and dog piss blended together. JUst quit writing, this sucks.
You mashed what should have been like 20 chapters in one clusterfuck. Rewrite it plz.