for A New Life in San Francisco4/21/2024 c20 Guest
I highly doubt the goblins would had let the ministry dumbledote or any one take the potter family gold and estate without looking into Harry's parents will. Plus he was declared an adult at 14 due to the tournament and his estate would go to Harry rightfully. So Dumbledore and anybody would not get the chance to get their hands on his family gold! Also the Potter manor would had family wards tie to the potter bloodline so how the fucking! Heck! did know it all and the gold digger family get his houses and gold! anybody else to get Harry's gold and estate when he is alive and innocent!
I highly doubt the goblins would had let the ministry dumbledote or any one take the potter family gold and estate without looking into Harry's parents will. Plus he was declared an adult at 14 due to the tournament and his estate would go to Harry rightfully. So Dumbledore and anybody would not get the chance to get their hands on his family gold! Also the Potter manor would had family wards tie to the potter bloodline so how the fucking! Heck! did know it all and the gold digger family get his houses and gold! anybody else to get Harry's gold and estate when he is alive and innocent!
4/7/2022 c11 Eragon135790
dont get why harry is that stupid, liked the ff so far but mc got too stupid for me to stay.
dont get why harry is that stupid, liked the ff so far but mc got too stupid for me to stay.
9/5/2021 c1 
6SD1
I have to give you credit where credit is due. This story is amazing. I read it about once a year. Today marks the sixth reading and I can't wait to get lost in story once again.
6SD1I have to give you credit where credit is due. This story is amazing. I read it about once a year. Today marks the sixth reading and I can't wait to get lost in story once again.
9/9/2020 c27 Trixia Oliver
Ah como eu queria ver Harry arrasando a o mundo mágico depois de tudo o que ele passou. Queria ver Dumbledore sofrendo, Rufus também. E Ron? Preso pelo resto de sua vida. Uma história incrível! A trama foi muito bem entrelaçada. Amei.
Ah como eu queria ver Harry arrasando a o mundo mágico depois de tudo o que ele passou. Queria ver Dumbledore sofrendo, Rufus também. E Ron? Preso pelo resto de sua vida. Uma história incrível! A trama foi muito bem entrelaçada. Amei.
11/22/2019 c21 Matt
Why do you insist on spelling Coop with a U in it? The name is Coop, not Coup. A coup is something completely different, as Monty Python would tell you. Look it up online - all the information on the Charmed characters is readily available.
Why do you insist on spelling Coop with a U in it? The name is Coop, not Coup. A coup is something completely different, as Monty Python would tell you. Look it up online - all the information on the Charmed characters is readily available.
11/22/2019 c20 Matt
Their children would gain nothing from Hogwarts. The children of the Halliwell sisters go to normal school and learn normal subjects, none of which are taught at Hogwarts. All the classes which are taught at Hogwarts are for wizards, and none of the Halliwell family are wizards. So they won't learn anything useful from classes at Hogwarts. And since Muggle Studies at Hogwarts is known to be about 100 years behind the times, the Muggle Studies professor isn't likely to be much help either.
Their children would gain nothing from Hogwarts. The children of the Halliwell sisters go to normal school and learn normal subjects, none of which are taught at Hogwarts. All the classes which are taught at Hogwarts are for wizards, and none of the Halliwell family are wizards. So they won't learn anything useful from classes at Hogwarts. And since Muggle Studies at Hogwarts is known to be about 100 years behind the times, the Muggle Studies professor isn't likely to be much help either.
11/22/2019 c19 Matt
What is wrong with you? England is eight hours ahead of California, not behind. At seven a.m. on November 1 in California it's three p.m. in the afternoon on the same day in England. Get a clue.
What is wrong with you? England is eight hours ahead of California, not behind. At seven a.m. on November 1 in California it's three p.m. in the afternoon on the same day in England. Get a clue.
11/22/2019 c6 Matt
Okay, some examples. They don't have flats in the U.S., they have apartments. They don't have centres, they have centers. Anything that ends in an r and an e has the e first, then the r. The only place that has a warden is a prison. An orphanage would have a Director or Administrator. Offices don't have stalls, they have cubicles.
Okay, some examples. They don't have flats in the U.S., they have apartments. They don't have centres, they have centers. Anything that ends in an r and an e has the e first, then the r. The only place that has a warden is a prison. An orphanage would have a Director or Administrator. Offices don't have stalls, they have cubicles.
11/22/2019 c6 Matt
You do know the Charmed Ones and their families are American and live in San Francisco, California, right? Yet your writing has them speaking like people from the U.K. You have them using many words and phrases which are not used by Americans. So you're making no attempt to make the dialogue in this story at all authentic. Obviously you're from the U.K., but that shouldn't matter.
You do know the Charmed Ones and their families are American and live in San Francisco, California, right? Yet your writing has them speaking like people from the U.K. You have them using many words and phrases which are not used by Americans. So you're making no attempt to make the dialogue in this story at all authentic. Obviously you're from the U.K., but that shouldn't matter.
5/14/2019 c27 WyteWolf91
Ok so this was the first crossover that I read with the charmed ones and Harry Potter. AND I LOVED IT. it was a bit odd, a little confusing then it was a bit of a tear jerker and a bundle of laughs in between lol Thanks for an awesome story.
Ok so this was the first crossover that I read with the charmed ones and Harry Potter. AND I LOVED IT. it was a bit odd, a little confusing then it was a bit of a tear jerker and a bundle of laughs in between lol Thanks for an awesome story.
12/31/2018 c27 kirby19
This story was amazing! It was original, the writing was fantastic, and the length was perfect! I loved every bit of it, well done!
This story was amazing! It was original, the writing was fantastic, and the length was perfect! I loved every bit of it, well done!