for One White Rabbit8/6/2011 c4 Estel
I want to hear what happens in the healing house. chapter 5 please.
I want to hear what happens in the healing house. chapter 5 please.
6/9/2009 c4 
3KaoruKamiya307
Yay! The end is finally posted! I so proud of you! :D I love the ending phrases! So cute! Good job mellon-nin!
3KaoruKamiya307Yay! The end is finally posted! I so proud of you! :D I love the ending phrases! So cute! Good job mellon-nin!
3/10/2007 c3 KaoruKamiya307
Aw...poor Estel! Run Elladan, Elohir, and Elrond! good chappie! Update soon mellon-nin!
Aw...poor Estel! Run Elladan, Elohir, and Elrond! good chappie! Update soon mellon-nin!
2/11/2007 c3 trustingfrndshp
I'm glad they're so close to Estel and that he's managed to remain relatively unscathed; hope they find him ok; look forward to more:-)
I'm glad they're so close to Estel and that he's managed to remain relatively unscathed; hope they find him ok; look forward to more:-)
2/1/2007 c2 foxy loxy
You can't possibly be quitting on this story now, are you? I love fanfiction, but I love it better when the writer doesn't leave me in distress as to what happens next. So hurry up and tell me what's gonna happen!
You can't possibly be quitting on this story now, are you? I love fanfiction, but I love it better when the writer doesn't leave me in distress as to what happens next. So hurry up and tell me what's gonna happen!
9/12/2006 c2 Cutiepie2191
O! Awesome chapter! I'm loving this story so far! Update soon!:):)
O! Awesome chapter! I'm loving this story so far! Update soon!:):)
9/11/2006 c2 grumpy123
Run Estel run, take the bunny and run. Just for goodness sakes., run towards the house.
Run Estel run, take the bunny and run. Just for goodness sakes., run towards the house.
9/4/2006 c2 KaoruKamiya307
Yay! Another chappie. Poor Estel. One or two things. What did you name the bunny? Because the chappie is called Lossena and in the paragraph you wrote: "I’ll take care of you, Lossen". Also, you wrote: "Smiling slightly to himself he found his way home". In that same paragraph. Just some technical stuff. Otherwise, JOLLY GOOD! =) Poor thing. It's time for Elrond to go into protective mode. *sigh* I do love Elrond in protective mode. lol! Me likey the rabbit! Good chappie. see ya soon!
Yay! Another chappie. Poor Estel. One or two things. What did you name the bunny? Because the chappie is called Lossena and in the paragraph you wrote: "I’ll take care of you, Lossen". Also, you wrote: "Smiling slightly to himself he found his way home". In that same paragraph. Just some technical stuff. Otherwise, JOLLY GOOD! =) Poor thing. It's time for Elrond to go into protective mode. *sigh* I do love Elrond in protective mode. lol! Me likey the rabbit! Good chappie. see ya soon!
8/20/2006 c1 grumpy123
Very good start to your story, Estel has made his escape into the outside world. He did wait a very onlg time to get out there.
Very good start to your story, Estel has made his escape into the outside world. He did wait a very onlg time to get out there.
8/14/2006 c1 KaoruKamiya307
*HUFF PUFF* *throws computer angerily into the wall* I SWEAR IF I GET ONE MORE REVIEW THROTLE, I'LL... *notices you* Oh! Sorry! It's just that I have retyped this LONG review 3 times already! It's getting annoying! So here it goes! Hopefully it will go through! Neko's review: Take 4: *deep breath*
YAY! I get to be the first one to review! What's this? A six-year-old Estel? *raises eyebrow* Snow? *raises eyebrow even higher* LOL! I love the chappie. The only thing I would change is that when a different character speaks, make it into a new paragraph. It's just a personal preference. You don't have to if you don't want to! Just a suggestion! *hides in favorite little corner* (I tend to hide there a lot, don't I?) DON'T TAKE IT THE WRONG WAY PLEASE! Great chappie. LOVE YA!
Wish me luck! Hopefully the submit review won't give me another review throttle! Here I go! *moves cursor to the button* *clicks*
*HUFF PUFF* *throws computer angerily into the wall* I SWEAR IF I GET ONE MORE REVIEW THROTLE, I'LL... *notices you* Oh! Sorry! It's just that I have retyped this LONG review 3 times already! It's getting annoying! So here it goes! Hopefully it will go through! Neko's review: Take 4: *deep breath*
YAY! I get to be the first one to review! What's this? A six-year-old Estel? *raises eyebrow* Snow? *raises eyebrow even higher* LOL! I love the chappie. The only thing I would change is that when a different character speaks, make it into a new paragraph. It's just a personal preference. You don't have to if you don't want to! Just a suggestion! *hides in favorite little corner* (I tend to hide there a lot, don't I?) DON'T TAKE IT THE WRONG WAY PLEASE! Great chappie. LOVE YA!
Wish me luck! Hopefully the submit review won't give me another review throttle! Here I go! *moves cursor to the button* *clicks*