for Undecided10/26/2008 c2 
33Morbidmuch
I really like this story, but chapter 2 and 3 seemed a bit like you just ripped off the words from the script.
33MorbidmuchI really like this story, but chapter 2 and 3 seemed a bit like you just ripped off the words from the script.
4/3/2008 c12 1Lit.foryou
hi,I love this story! I'm glad Rory and Dean broken up. I like the "unsure" Jess...(he tought that Rory wants to break up with him...that was I mean with unsure :] ) You write awesome!
I hope you'll update soon and you can write more! [i come from german...so sry for my bad english^^]
1Lit.foryouhi,I love this story! I'm glad Rory and Dean broken up. I like the "unsure" Jess...(he tought that Rory wants to break up with him...that was I mean with unsure :] ) You write awesome!
I hope you'll update soon and you can write more! [i come from german...so sry for my bad english^^]
1/5/2008 c12 SiriuslyRory
i really like this story, maybe just chuck in some cute moments or have luke find out and have a luke jess talk.
i really like this story, maybe just chuck in some cute moments or have luke find out and have a luke jess talk.
12/9/2007 c12 2trombonechick
um...
what if luke found out about jess and rory dating and gave jess some big "don't you dare hurt her" lecture...
i don't know. i just don't want this fic to disappear.
2trombonechickum...
what if luke found out about jess and rory dating and gave jess some big "don't you dare hurt her" lecture...
i don't know. i just don't want this fic to disappear.
9/4/2007 c11 3truest-of-true-loves
hey! i finally finished reading your fic!
lol
i think it would be great to see how jess and lane act towards each other, like a three way date, or a double date with a boring korean doctor (somehow managed to convince her mom...) and they don't get along but rory has to leave and they somehow bond over something big or stupid and then like you could also explore the town gossiping away about jess and how rory and dean broke up...idk, anyhoo email me or ym me, ok?
3truest-of-true-loveshey! i finally finished reading your fic!
lol
i think it would be great to see how jess and lane act towards each other, like a three way date, or a double date with a boring korean doctor (somehow managed to convince her mom...) and they don't get along but rory has to leave and they somehow bond over something big or stupid and then like you could also explore the town gossiping away about jess and how rory and dean broke up...idk, anyhoo email me or ym me, ok?
9/4/2007 c10 truest-of-true-loves
ooh a week of forced hanging out? how fun!
and i totally laughed out loud when lane said she was living through rory...
ooh a week of forced hanging out? how fun!
and i totally laughed out loud when lane said she was living through rory...
9/4/2007 c7 truest-of-true-loves
aww...i think you should have put more awkwardness in it, bec i think it would have been funny to see rory get all awkward
but it was very cute nonetheless...aww!
aww...i think you should have put more awkwardness in it, bec i think it would have been funny to see rory get all awkward
but it was very cute nonetheless...aww!
9/4/2007 c5 truest-of-true-loves
hmm, his reaction was so "boom!" but if i remember correctly that seems right.
hmm, his reaction was so "boom!" but if i remember correctly that seems right.
9/4/2007 c4 truest-of-true-loves
I love flashbacks! it was a good flashback. wow you really know your gilmore girls!
I love flashbacks! it was a good flashback. wow you really know your gilmore girls!
8/14/2007 c2 truest-of-true-loves
i loved how paris was when she was freaking out about ZAGAT
but her smiling at jess seemed off...would she do that? i havent watched in along time, so maybe
i loved how paris was when she was freaking out about ZAGAT
but her smiling at jess seemed off...would she do that? i havent watched in along time, so maybe