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7/23/2019 c16 Guest
Both a face-fault and sweat-drop in the same sentence? Pretty cringeworthy. Please stop using those.
7/23/2019 c16 Guest
Would have been a great chapter if it wasn't ruined by that face-fault, the mangled English ruining the immersion.

Please delete it.
7/23/2019 c16 Guest
typo
glow to flicker - glow and flicker
7/21/2019 c1 Guest
ranma isn't the type to watch anime are you sure your not self inserting?
7/20/2019 c12 Guest
I wish you didn't have Misato go out with Kaji, he's such a creep.
7/20/2019 c12 Guest
Sea of Duroc - Sea of Dirac
7/20/2019 c11 Guest
the sweatdropping and facefaulting is dragging down the story.

Just feels pretty cringe-worthy, have no idea why the author thought using either crime against the English language.
7/20/2019 c11 Guest
The Amazon's - The Amazons

throws - throes

hording - hoarding
7/15/2019 c11 Guest
The Amazon's - The Amazons
7/14/2019 c9 Guest
Etu, Brute - Et tu, Brute
7/14/2019 c8 Guest
You're moves - Your moves
7/14/2019 c7 Guest
She new - She knew
7/14/2019 c5 Guest
contemplated to where that would lead - contemplated where that would lead
7/14/2019 c5 Guest
"sweat-drop"

Please stop using this, it looks awful in written form, butchering the English language, your usage also come across as repetitive.
7/14/2019 c4 Guest
have almost certainly went - have almost certainly gone
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