
8/30/2006 c1
3doragon no mizu
Not bad, buddy!
Not perfect, but not bad either. I find poetry to be very hard to capture the essence of and do a half decent one explaining how you feel. And (as I prefer all my poetry to do), it ryhmed! So, overall, good job!
::hugs::

Not bad, buddy!
Not perfect, but not bad either. I find poetry to be very hard to capture the essence of and do a half decent one explaining how you feel. And (as I prefer all my poetry to do), it ryhmed! So, overall, good job!
::hugs::
8/16/2006 c1
16AnimegirlKiki
I not much of a poetry person but this was pretty good. It discribes what Miroku is feeling pretty well. Nice job! Later! =)

I not much of a poetry person but this was pretty good. It discribes what Miroku is feeling pretty well. Nice job! Later! =)