6/7/2023 c1 5Roza Dragomir Belikova
Okay, so this is a good story; but the grammar could use some work. Keep at it.
Okay, so this is a good story; but the grammar could use some work. Keep at it.
7/21/2011 c19 26XxXNightcoreQueenXxX
this is duh-huh confusing for the most part.
but it's made to make your mind work in difrent way's
like a never ending abyss of reality, fantasy, and the general balances of what is real and what is not. like a twilight line between insanity and sanity, and with a main plot, that onely the most opend minded and simpel minded person would get. i must say this story has no meening and meening at the same time. and it is still as is inntresting as it is boring. but still, i want to hear what's to happen in future, past and present.
but it is still amusing to read, it's nice to se someone get in to the undiskoverd world of writhing, wiich lise under water like an icebeg, like your unconsensness of your brain.
and i'm sure you'll understand me, cuz your story makes me think you can, even if you'll have to think or not think about it.
bye bye! ;3
this is duh-huh confusing for the most part.
but it's made to make your mind work in difrent way's
like a never ending abyss of reality, fantasy, and the general balances of what is real and what is not. like a twilight line between insanity and sanity, and with a main plot, that onely the most opend minded and simpel minded person would get. i must say this story has no meening and meening at the same time. and it is still as is inntresting as it is boring. but still, i want to hear what's to happen in future, past and present.
but it is still amusing to read, it's nice to se someone get in to the undiskoverd world of writhing, wiich lise under water like an icebeg, like your unconsensness of your brain.
and i'm sure you'll understand me, cuz your story makes me think you can, even if you'll have to think or not think about it.
bye bye! ;3
6/7/2011 c19 Desiree Phantom
Next chapter! You rock! Though this is slightly random.
Next chapter! You rock! Though this is slightly random.
6/7/2011 c12 Desiree Phantom
You do know that you over exagerate Teal'c saying, "Indead" right?
You do know that you over exagerate Teal'c saying, "Indead" right?
6/7/2011 c6 Desiree Phantom
Guys! Guys in White!
Guys! Guys in White!
3/22/2010 c19 Felicity
Thankyou. it was brilliant
Thankyou. it was brilliant
3/21/2010 c16 Felicity
I was wondering if your going to continue because I loved it
I was wondering if your going to continue because I loved it
9/1/2009 c1 Jarod Aka The Pretender
Hello, I Like It.
How about adding Men in Black and "U.N.I.T" from Doctor Who.
Hello, I Like It.
How about adding Men in Black and "U.N.I.T" from Doctor Who.
8/30/2009 c19 11Genuka
Ack! Save me from all of the authors who insist on cliffies... Please? (turning to the author) BAd Author! BAd BAd Bad Author! Where's the rest of it! You can't stop there!
Ack! Save me from all of the authors who insist on cliffies... Please? (turning to the author) BAd Author! BAd BAd Bad Author! Where's the rest of it! You can't stop there!
8/26/2009 c17 Genuka
We are waiting very patiently for the next installment everyone else more than me but well... WE WANT MORE! I come get u if you don't post next chappy soon. (evil cackle) Or at least i want more soon. Pretty please?
We are waiting very patiently for the next installment everyone else more than me but well... WE WANT MORE! I come get u if you don't post next chappy soon. (evil cackle) Or at least i want more soon. Pretty please?
8/23/2009 c18 21Happy1K1nob1
Wow! This story is SO AWESOME! BUT YOU JUST CAN'T LEAVE IT HANGING LIKE THIS AT CHAPTER 17! YOU'VE GOT TO GOT TO GOT TO CONTINUE IT!~!
Wow! This story is SO AWESOME! BUT YOU JUST CAN'T LEAVE IT HANGING LIKE THIS AT CHAPTER 17! YOU'VE GOT TO GOT TO GOT TO CONTINUE IT!~!
8/14/2009 c1 3Scarlett De Fontaine
I love the idea! It's been so long since I watched Danny Phantom, and nobody seems to do Danny Phantom fics.
I love the idea! It's been so long since I watched Danny Phantom, and nobody seems to do Danny Phantom fics.
8/14/2009 c18 11Genuka
What's next? I gotta know! As for betaing your own stuff your doing pretty good there are some issues that are fixable some relate to the particular universes that you are mixing and how you're doing it most are just your spelling and grammar. Otherwise your doing great. You've got me hooked. I'd love to beta the rest of the story!
-Genuka-
What's next? I gotta know! As for betaing your own stuff your doing pretty good there are some issues that are fixable some relate to the particular universes that you are mixing and how you're doing it most are just your spelling and grammar. Otherwise your doing great. You've got me hooked. I'd love to beta the rest of the story!
-Genuka-