8/14/2009 c6 Genuka
You've done really well so far. I'll beta read for you! I love stuff like this. On to the rest of the story! Allons-y!
You've done really well so far. I'll beta read for you! I love stuff like this. On to the rest of the story! Allons-y!
4/7/2009 c18 Guest
to meny shows!my head herts!
to meny shows!my head herts!
4/7/2009 c6 pwese
I whant a cokke to!
I whant a cokke to!
12/30/2008 c1 7Dracardoris
hah! great beginning.. i think the whole the come out of the ghost portal as if it is a stargate thing is a really brilliant concept. good job.
hah! great beginning.. i think the whole the come out of the ghost portal as if it is a stargate thing is a really brilliant concept. good job.
12/13/2008 c2 Andrikq
Personally, I think you can't spell. I also think the story reads like an 8th grader wrote it and didn't bother to get a Beta Reader for a second opinion. The idea for the story is interesting, but you really need to revise. Really.
Personally, I think you can't spell. I also think the story reads like an 8th grader wrote it and didn't bother to get a Beta Reader for a second opinion. The idea for the story is interesting, but you really need to revise. Really.
5/15/2008 c18 Wraith Queen 500
This is the best idea ever! i love your story. your plot and three way crossover was just ingenious!
This is the best idea ever! i love your story. your plot and three way crossover was just ingenious!
8/23/2007 c18 2Oraman Asturi
interesting direction to your story... quite odd though for danny to be captured by the guys from the asylum i umm meant in white yes thats what I meant...
interesting direction to your story... quite odd though for danny to be captured by the guys from the asylum i umm meant in white yes thats what I meant...
7/3/2007 c16 hope and love
i love it!
i love it!
6/27/2007 c15 1Blue Valour
It must be annoying to hear "I love it!" from the same person 15 times with no variation.
I find it difficult to edit my own work because I've been staring at it for hours. It's easier to pick out mistakes when you haven't looked at it for a while. But I can rarely wait that long before posting my stuff.
I like the ideas you used and the way you took care of the characters(IC) which was surprising when I started reading. This is like a diamond in the rough. Cool
It must be annoying to hear "I love it!" from the same person 15 times with no variation.
I find it difficult to edit my own work because I've been staring at it for hours. It's easier to pick out mistakes when you haven't looked at it for a while. But I can rarely wait that long before posting my stuff.
I like the ideas you used and the way you took care of the characters(IC) which was surprising when I started reading. This is like a diamond in the rough. Cool
6/26/2007 c15 2Oraman Asturi
Your mind really is a strange place isn't it? Nice story though, I do wish you would work a bit on spelling but its readable, and I really don't care if anyone else likes it or not. The story is more important than spelling and grammar as long as its understandable which it is!
Your mind really is a strange place isn't it? Nice story though, I do wish you would work a bit on spelling but its readable, and I really don't care if anyone else likes it or not. The story is more important than spelling and grammar as long as its understandable which it is!
3/12/2007 c2 18Shadewolf7
OK, I can't help it. Your spelling is painful. Colonel is a rank (And, if Jack's a colonel, shouldn't Carter be a major?) Asgaurd and Goa'uld, but those two weren't so bad... the idea is promising, though.
OK, I can't help it. Your spelling is painful. Colonel is a rank (And, if Jack's a colonel, shouldn't Carter be a major?) Asgaurd and Goa'uld, but those two weren't so bad... the idea is promising, though.