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8/14/2009 c10 11Genuka
Like I said I'll beta your stories!
8/14/2009 c6 Genuka
You've done really well so far. I'll beta read for you! I love stuff like this. On to the rest of the story! Allons-y!
4/7/2009 c18 Guest
to meny shows!my head herts!
4/7/2009 c6 pwese
I whant a cokke to!
12/30/2008 c1 7Dracardoris
hah! great beginning.. i think the whole the come out of the ghost portal as if it is a stargate thing is a really brilliant concept. good job.
12/13/2008 c2 Andrikq
Personally, I think you can't spell. I also think the story reads like an 8th grader wrote it and didn't bother to get a Beta Reader for a second opinion. The idea for the story is interesting, but you really need to revise. Really.
5/15/2008 c18 Wraith Queen 500
This is the best idea ever! i love your story. your plot and three way crossover was just ingenious!
8/23/2007 c18 2Oraman Asturi
interesting direction to your story... quite odd though for danny to be captured by the guys from the asylum i umm meant in white yes thats what I meant...
7/31/2007 c17 Oraman Asturi
Nice... not sure what else to say about it.
7/3/2007 c16 hope and love
i love it!
7/3/2007 c16 Oraman Asturi
nice...
6/27/2007 c15 1Blue Valour
It must be annoying to hear "I love it!" from the same person 15 times with no variation.

I find it difficult to edit my own work because I've been staring at it for hours. It's easier to pick out mistakes when you haven't looked at it for a while. But I can rarely wait that long before posting my stuff.

I like the ideas you used and the way you took care of the characters(IC) which was surprising when I started reading. This is like a diamond in the rough. Cool
6/26/2007 c15 2Oraman Asturi
Your mind really is a strange place isn't it? Nice story though, I do wish you would work a bit on spelling but its readable, and I really don't care if anyone else likes it or not. The story is more important than spelling and grammar as long as its understandable which it is!
6/25/2007 c15 4Hope and love
i love it!
3/12/2007 c2 18Shadewolf7
OK, I can't help it. Your spelling is painful. Colonel is a rank (And, if Jack's a colonel, shouldn't Carter be a major?) Asgaurd and Goa'uld, but those two weren't so bad... the idea is promising, though.
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