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5/12/2013 c1 1Liana K. Hourglass
Nice. I think those reasons of yours can be accepted. Though I must try to ask and curious about the continuation of the words "surpass the" at the second paragraph there. Sorry, it can't be help. It seems that you just hang it there without any explanation on it. Anyway, great one-shot though and I like it a lot. Continue your hard work on it. :)

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10/31/2010 c1 Whyte Raven
Cute.(:
6/6/2007 c1 73tami3
Nicely written. It's not plausible if you follow the story line, but still nicely written. If you want to know why, look below, but it'll be spoilers if you haven't read all the way.

*SPOILERS*

1. Kaito encouraged Akito to be really good at AT so he could use him to fight enemies.

2. Agito was only "created" when Akito became so afraid of his strength, which Kaito used to hurt others, that he needed another personality to fight for him. So Agito would be after this.

*END SPOILERS*

It's on if you want to read up to chap. 139.
12/5/2006 c1 17D.K. Dracona
^.^ Loved the fic. That would be cool if that was the reason!
8/18/2006 c1 Ominae
Nice one!

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