for Somewhere other than Here9/30/2006 c1 fliengdolphine
i have discovered a flaw. and this is a real flaw. not like last time.ok. ron and hermione were 16 when they had bonnie. so if bonnie is 11 that makes ron and hermione 27. so how can draco's son go to hogwarts with bonnie unless draco and cho had braton when they were 16 as well.hahahaha. got you didnt i.i just want to know.
i have discovered a flaw. and this is a real flaw. not like last time.ok. ron and hermione were 16 when they had bonnie. so if bonnie is 11 that makes ron and hermione 27. so how can draco's son go to hogwarts with bonnie unless draco and cho had braton when they were 16 as well.hahahaha. got you didnt i.i just want to know.
9/27/2006 c5 rbt1980
the classes sound fun , but who her DADA prof could it be her Dad or her uncle ? Most important who is Bonnie's crush ?
the classes sound fun , but who her DADA prof could it be her Dad or her uncle ? Most important who is Bonnie's crush ?
9/27/2006 c4 rbt1980
Oh poor Cadience , he in love Patience and the little tike does not even know it . The new Goldend Trio all Got into Gryffindor, why did you put them in there . It could of been interesting to see them in a different house .
Oh poor Cadience , he in love Patience and the little tike does not even know it . The new Goldend Trio all Got into Gryffindor, why did you put them in there . It could of been interesting to see them in a different house .
9/27/2006 c3 rbt1980
How can Bonnie not know anyone at Hogwarts ? she has 7 uncles and 2 aunts . None of them have kids , or if they did none went to Hogwarts .
How can Bonnie not know anyone at Hogwarts ? she has 7 uncles and 2 aunts . None of them have kids , or if they did none went to Hogwarts .
9/27/2006 c2 rbt1980
oo Bonnie and Braton setting in a tree , first comes love then comes marrage , then baby Harry in a baby carage .
ok , it does look as if the two might hook up . I am all for that , but then again i am a Draco and Hermione shipper .
it nice to see how much Ron cares about his kids .
oo Bonnie and Braton setting in a tree , first comes love then comes marrage , then baby Harry in a baby carage .
ok , it does look as if the two might hook up . I am all for that , but then again i am a Draco and Hermione shipper .
it nice to see how much Ron cares about his kids .
9/27/2006 c1 rbt1980
Again I think you need a prolog for this story , i would like to know what happened durring the last 6 years . They are having 8 kids ? Have Ron and Hermione heard of birth control? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, put Hermione's mom and dad and her bother and sister in this story I would like to see what has been going on with there life.
Again I think you need a prolog for this story , i would like to know what happened durring the last 6 years . They are having 8 kids ? Have Ron and Hermione heard of birth control? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, put Hermione's mom and dad and her bother and sister in this story I would like to see what has been going on with there life.
9/25/2006 c5 fliengdolphine
that was so cool. i didnt expect draco to be the potions teacher. well i did, but i didnt see that comeing.i realy like this chapter. how is the website doing. can i have the sneal peak. I WILL BE YOUR FRIEND. WAIT, IM ALREADY YOUR FRIEND. OK HOW ABOUT THIS. I'LL BE YOUR BESTEST FRIEND AND GIVE YOU A COOKIE. NO. HOW ABOUT 2. 3.4.5. OK I'LL GIVE YOU 10 COOKIES.PLEASE.*TEARS COMING OUT OF EYES AND IS ON KNEES BEGGING TO SEE THE WEBSITE*.PLEASE. THINK ABOUT IT AND E-MAIL ME.
that was so cool. i didnt expect draco to be the potions teacher. well i did, but i didnt see that comeing.i realy like this chapter. how is the website doing. can i have the sneal peak. I WILL BE YOUR FRIEND. WAIT, IM ALREADY YOUR FRIEND. OK HOW ABOUT THIS. I'LL BE YOUR BESTEST FRIEND AND GIVE YOU A COOKIE. NO. HOW ABOUT 2. 3.4.5. OK I'LL GIVE YOU 10 COOKIES.PLEASE.*TEARS COMING OUT OF EYES AND IS ON KNEES BEGGING TO SEE THE WEBSITE*.PLEASE. THINK ABOUT IT AND E-MAIL ME.
9/25/2006 c5 
8Miragee
Aw I loved this chapter! Yes Malfoy is a great big ferret. Apparently Braton is too. Update soon!
8MirageeAw I loved this chapter! Yes Malfoy is a great big ferret. Apparently Braton is too. Update soon!
9/24/2006 c5 sballLuvr5
wow when it comes to learning, bonnie is just like her mom lol... PLEASE update soon!
Kristi
wow when it comes to learning, bonnie is just like her mom lol... PLEASE update soon!
Kristi
9/24/2006 c5 Meche
OMG! good job, really interesting
OMG! good job, really interesting
9/24/2006 c5 harryismyboyfriend
Good job! I think that it was a good typical first day, but you shouldn't relate that much to the book. Let the characters do their own thing. As for the contest..I have review tons so you can deffinatly count me in! TRy your best to update as soon as possible!
Happy writng (or typing!)
Molly
Good job! I think that it was a good typical first day, but you shouldn't relate that much to the book. Let the characters do their own thing. As for the contest..I have review tons so you can deffinatly count me in! TRy your best to update as soon as possible!
Happy writng (or typing!)
Molly
9/23/2006 c1 dozzinot
why don't you just rewrite the script for the Harry Potter movie? pfft..I don't have the intrest in reading your sequel. NOt your best chapter, really dicourage me from reading your story. your story sounds boring and a waste of time.
why don't you just rewrite the script for the Harry Potter movie? pfft..I don't have the intrest in reading your sequel. NOt your best chapter, really dicourage me from reading your story. your story sounds boring and a waste of time.
9/16/2006 c4 fliengdolphine
OMG!I CANT BELIEVE YOU WROTE ANOTHER ONE. I CAN TELL THIS WILL BE A GOOD ONE.YOU ONLY HAD ONE MISTAKE. IF RON AND HERMIONE HAVE BONNIE, CADENCE, THE TWINN GIRLS, THE TWIN BOYS, AND ABBY, HOW THEY BE HAVING #8. WATCH THIS. BONNIE=1 CHILD.CADENCE=2. THE TWIN GIRLS=3 AND 4. THE TWIN BOYS=5 AND 6. AND ABBY MAKES 7 AND I JUST CAUGHT MY MISTAKE. NEVER MIND. SO IS IT GOING TO BE A BOY OR GIRL. THIS IS WHY YOU HAVENT E-MAILED ME.KEEP WRITING AND E-MAIL ME DETAILS ABOUT THE STORY.
OMG!I CANT BELIEVE YOU WROTE ANOTHER ONE. I CAN TELL THIS WILL BE A GOOD ONE.YOU ONLY HAD ONE MISTAKE. IF RON AND HERMIONE HAVE BONNIE, CADENCE, THE TWINN GIRLS, THE TWIN BOYS, AND ABBY, HOW THEY BE HAVING #8. WATCH THIS. BONNIE=1 CHILD.CADENCE=2. THE TWIN GIRLS=3 AND 4. THE TWIN BOYS=5 AND 6. AND ABBY MAKES 7 AND I JUST CAUGHT MY MISTAKE. NEVER MIND. SO IS IT GOING TO BE A BOY OR GIRL. THIS IS WHY YOU HAVENT E-MAILED ME.KEEP WRITING AND E-MAIL ME DETAILS ABOUT THE STORY.