
8/20/2008 c25
16lilbratty74
This story is so good, please keep writing!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! xD

This story is so good, please keep writing!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! xD
8/20/2008 c25 taylorxxsue
I loved it.
Awesome job
I love Bonnie and Ron and Braton and Hermione and Patience
haha just wanted to include that
-Tay
I loved it.
Awesome job
I love Bonnie and Ron and Braton and Hermione and Patience
haha just wanted to include that
-Tay
8/19/2008 c25 nycgirl18
I really liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what is going to happen to Braton and Bonnie. I hope their love blooms in the next chapter. Please don't take too long to update. I'm dying to know what happens. Keep up the great job :)
I really liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what is going to happen to Braton and Bonnie. I hope their love blooms in the next chapter. Please don't take too long to update. I'm dying to know what happens. Keep up the great job :)
8/19/2008 c25
8auntiem911
it was very good and out-shined the long wait in my opinion, though i hope to read the next chapter sooner then this one was put out but no rush.
Morgan | Auntiem911

it was very good and out-shined the long wait in my opinion, though i hope to read the next chapter sooner then this one was put out but no rush.
Morgan | Auntiem911
8/17/2008 c24 nycgirl18
Please review soon. I'm dying to know what happens. I read the first two stories a long time ago and I just recently stumbled upon this one. I love it. I can't wait please write and quickly, I'm dying here! :)
Please review soon. I'm dying to know what happens. I read the first two stories a long time ago and I just recently stumbled upon this one. I love it. I can't wait please write and quickly, I'm dying here! :)
7/16/2008 c24 TheDivaDivine
Thank you so much for answering all of my questions. If you would like my email address it is . It is wonderful how quickly this story is progressing. I really don't have anything negative to say about this chapter cause I know that it is a transitioning chapter. I am really curious as to how Ron Weasley is going to help Braton. I personally hopes he adopts him but then again if if Ron does adopt him then Bonnie and Briton can't be together as a future couple. The sexual wet dream Briton had was intense but yet extremely funny at the same time.
Thank you so much for answering all of my questions. If you would like my email address it is . It is wonderful how quickly this story is progressing. I really don't have anything negative to say about this chapter cause I know that it is a transitioning chapter. I am really curious as to how Ron Weasley is going to help Braton. I personally hopes he adopts him but then again if if Ron does adopt him then Bonnie and Briton can't be together as a future couple. The sexual wet dream Briton had was intense but yet extremely funny at the same time.
7/10/2008 c23 TheDivaDivine
First of all let me say this before going into specifics...despite what I am about to say I love this chapter. I do however have a problem with a specific part of the chapter when Harry comes out of no where and immediately asked Ron "What did you do?" I am assuming that Harry knew to come to the Malfoy estate because Hermione was alarm. Harry would not have come due to underage magic being use because Braton stabbed Malfoy in the heart and no magic was used. But how did the other aurors appeared out of no where? As if they were following Harry? Plus they tried to arrest Ron without hearing from Ron what had happened until Briton told Harry that he killed is father. They also did arrest Briton after his confession without asking what happen. People don't normally go to jail if it is proven that a person was killed in self defense. I just think they should have taken him in for questioning and then follow up by questioning Bonnie. Other than that I love how this story is progressing with alot of interesting adventure that always lead a reader to ask what will happen next. Please don't take too long to update the next time. The wait is exhausting.
First of all let me say this before going into specifics...despite what I am about to say I love this chapter. I do however have a problem with a specific part of the chapter when Harry comes out of no where and immediately asked Ron "What did you do?" I am assuming that Harry knew to come to the Malfoy estate because Hermione was alarm. Harry would not have come due to underage magic being use because Braton stabbed Malfoy in the heart and no magic was used. But how did the other aurors appeared out of no where? As if they were following Harry? Plus they tried to arrest Ron without hearing from Ron what had happened until Briton told Harry that he killed is father. They also did arrest Briton after his confession without asking what happen. People don't normally go to jail if it is proven that a person was killed in self defense. I just think they should have taken him in for questioning and then follow up by questioning Bonnie. Other than that I love how this story is progressing with alot of interesting adventure that always lead a reader to ask what will happen next. Please don't take too long to update the next time. The wait is exhausting.
7/10/2008 c23
8auntiem911
Really good chapter and well worth the wait. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Oh and that is terible about Braton.
Morgan | Auntiem911

Really good chapter and well worth the wait. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Oh and that is terible about Braton.
Morgan | Auntiem911
4/12/2008 c22 lisa
the story is amazing... i love all of your stories! so please UPDATE SOON!
the story is amazing... i love all of your stories! so please UPDATE SOON!
4/11/2008 c22 TheDivaDivine
Best chapter by far. Must more emotional elements in it between the characters. The awkwardness, teen agnst, desparation for survival was express beautifully. Must better at expressing Braton's emotional feelings for Bonnie and for his father. So much action pack and emotional events all in one short chapter. Even though there is no cliff hanger to this chapter it leaves you wondering what will happen next. BRAVA
Best chapter by far. Must more emotional elements in it between the characters. The awkwardness, teen agnst, desparation for survival was express beautifully. Must better at expressing Braton's emotional feelings for Bonnie and for his father. So much action pack and emotional events all in one short chapter. Even though there is no cliff hanger to this chapter it leaves you wondering what will happen next. BRAVA
4/10/2008 c22 sballLuvr5
yay! this was a really great chapter! go braton! lol... anyways, can't wait for the next chap, update soon!
Kristi
yay! this was a really great chapter! go braton! lol... anyways, can't wait for the next chap, update soon!
Kristi