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7/27/2007 c1 19Sora Sotara
Sad...Poor Kurama... I couldn't resist putting on the song though as I started reading either. Sad as it is, the story was well written...
7/7/2007 c1 8Count Napula
Rather depressing ending... a realistic take on life.
11/30/2006 c1 Yoko
I liked it. I just have one question; how did his mother die?
9/8/2006 c1 0i
this wasn't good at all

and Kurama & Yusuke together not happening
8/24/2006 c1 38crazykitsune17
That's not a very strong relationship if Kurama figures he "lost" Yusuke just because he got drunk on the day his mother day. Sure, that's irresponsible but nothing to consider "it's over" for. How long have the two been together in this fic anyway, and how old are they? Should they be considerably older if Kurama's mother just died (unless she died at a young age)? I don't know, the whole fic just didn't seem too plausible for me. Maybe work on explaining the circumstances of some things, such as how exactly Kurama's mother died and the details of Kurama and Yusuke's relationship. I think that would make this fic better. Overall, not too bad, but those are just seem things to work on for next time.

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8/23/2006 c1 13Kitsune-001
is this a one shot it had better not be not wiht an ending like that. can add this to my c2?

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