for The Biju Biju Fruit12/20/2022 c381 Guest
Awesome fic hope you update soon
Awesome fic hope you update soon
12/16/2022 c1 Kid-Kyubbi
ok so i love the concept and im following you and the story and wow 300 plus chapters now as some one who spends most days reading(just love to read but i dont think i can write) you have some MAJOR grammar errors thats typical when starting off and if english isnt your language and it may be better if your still writing but i really suggest getting a editor to go over chaptersi wouldnt mind haha) the bad grammer was fixed in my head as i read since i knew what you were saying it may be a pain to go back and fix em but it would help hopefully the later chapter are good
ok so i love the concept and im following you and the story and wow 300 plus chapters now as some one who spends most days reading(just love to read but i dont think i can write) you have some MAJOR grammar errors thats typical when starting off and if english isnt your language and it may be better if your still writing but i really suggest getting a editor to go over chaptersi wouldnt mind haha) the bad grammer was fixed in my head as i read since i knew what you were saying it may be a pain to go back and fix em but it would help hopefully the later chapter are good
8/26/2022 c381 
15Leaf Ranger
And so the fighting has begun as they're pushing their way through. With taht big bombshell at the end.
Good chapter, keep it up. *nods*
15Leaf RangerAnd so the fighting has begun as they're pushing their way through. With taht big bombshell at the end.
Good chapter, keep it up. *nods*
8/26/2022 c381 11Power of Magic
That was quite a chapter, and I look forward to the next one. It'll be interesting how Naruto being there will change the outcome of the war, and if they'll be able to save Ace or not
11Power of MagicThat was quite a chapter, and I look forward to the next one. It'll be interesting how Naruto being there will change the outcome of the war, and if they'll be able to save Ace or not
8/25/2022 c381 8warhawk talons
Wished it was longer, But glad we got an update. I'm surprised Sengoku didn't reveal Minato as Naruto's father or mentioned their mother's name. Wouldn't Kushina be infamous too? She is the wife of Dragon.
8warhawk talonsWished it was longer, But glad we got an update. I'm surprised Sengoku didn't reveal Minato as Naruto's father or mentioned their mother's name. Wouldn't Kushina be infamous too? She is the wife of Dragon.
8/25/2022 c381 4Gamelover41592
awesome work on this chapter though why did you decide to stop before the revel?
4Gamelover41592awesome work on this chapter though why did you decide to stop before the revel?
7/19/2022 c1 sbntcb0
so when will the arc start, also my favourite is the Whole Cake Island Arc, mostly because of the new characters there.
so when will the arc start, also my favourite is the Whole Cake Island Arc, mostly because of the new characters there.
7/2/2022 c380 Guest
Still writing I see, get a life or learn to actually write shit that want to read not 11 year olds who think wow naruto and one piece fanfic that barely changes cannon and follows the manga to the letter.
You couldn't get a original idea in this fanfic to save your life, honestly hope you just stop writing.
Still writing I see, get a life or learn to actually write shit that want to read not 11 year olds who think wow naruto and one piece fanfic that barely changes cannon and follows the manga to the letter.
You couldn't get a original idea in this fanfic to save your life, honestly hope you just stop writing.
6/11/2022 c65 dattebayo67
That scene with Naruto transforming into his 5 year-old self and putting the cute works on Nami to make her say yes is probably one of my favorite scenes in this story.
BTW: I like how after Arlong Park, Naruto and Nami seem to have develop a sibling like dynamic, if you consider moments like whiskey peak and drum island. I think it is quite wholesome
That scene with Naruto transforming into his 5 year-old self and putting the cute works on Nami to make her say yes is probably one of my favorite scenes in this story.
BTW: I like how after Arlong Park, Naruto and Nami seem to have develop a sibling like dynamic, if you consider moments like whiskey peak and drum island. I think it is quite wholesome