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So is this story dead or is it major writers block?
If its writers block see you in 2090 when we get to whole cake
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If its writers block see you in 2090 when we get to whole cake
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12/7/2021 c129
4LoneWolf427
Oh come on, that last line was a bit too cynical. Way to undercut the moment. Oh well, it's not a deal breaker so no big deal

Oh come on, that last line was a bit too cynical. Way to undercut the moment. Oh well, it's not a deal breaker so no big deal
9/6/2021 c378
15Leaf Ranger
So if I understand correctly...we're going to get the battle of Marineford. Something I've heard about...but that won't go well...because if I remember correctly, from what a few people told me...well...it doesn't go well for ace or Whitebeard.
I'm hoping maybe Naruto's presence can change things, but I guess we'll see, won't we?
Glad to see you're back, sorry about the writer's block and anything else getting you down, and sorry for taking so long to read this. Been busy...and lazy...sorry. x.x;;;

So if I understand correctly...we're going to get the battle of Marineford. Something I've heard about...but that won't go well...because if I remember correctly, from what a few people told me...well...it doesn't go well for ace or Whitebeard.
I'm hoping maybe Naruto's presence can change things, but I guess we'll see, won't we?
Glad to see you're back, sorry about the writer's block and anything else getting you down, and sorry for taking so long to read this. Been busy...and lazy...sorry. x.x;;;
9/4/2021 c1 Zenchi to zen'n no kami
Diablos... 14 años publicando sin abandonarla :0 realmente tienes mis respetos como quisiera que los creadores de otras historias tuvieran esa misma perseverancia T_T
Diablos... 14 años publicando sin abandonarla :0 realmente tienes mis respetos como quisiera que los creadores de otras historias tuvieran esa misma perseverancia T_T
9/3/2021 c111
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Crap! Disregard the last review regarding my image of Naruto in this story, I forgot that he DID have the headband. My bad. Is it still okay though if I imagine him in the outfit from the first series? Like I said, it's easier that way

Crap! Disregard the last review regarding my image of Naruto in this story, I forgot that he DID have the headband. My bad. Is it still okay though if I imagine him in the outfit from the first series? Like I said, it's easier that way
9/3/2021 c110 LoneWolf427
Even though he ISN'T wearing the clothes he does in the series, along with the others, is it okay if I still picture him that way as I read? I mean of course it's without the headband, but still. It's easier for me
Even though he ISN'T wearing the clothes he does in the series, along with the others, is it okay if I still picture him that way as I read? I mean of course it's without the headband, but still. It's easier for me
9/2/2021 c378 Guest
Interesting.
Interesting.
8/26/2021 c378
10Power of Magic
That was quite the chapter, and I look forward to seeing how things go in the next one. Glad that you've taken the vaccine, but sorry that you've had/got writers block as I thought that you'd forgotten about this fanfic or something. Hopefully the next chapter will be updated sooner (unless you'll still have the writers block)

That was quite the chapter, and I look forward to seeing how things go in the next one. Glad that you've taken the vaccine, but sorry that you've had/got writers block as I thought that you'd forgotten about this fanfic or something. Hopefully the next chapter will be updated sooner (unless you'll still have the writers block)