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15Leaf Ranger
So they've got themselves a fighting crew now. That's good. Guess we'll see what comes of it.
Goo work, keep it up!
15Leaf RangerSo they've got themselves a fighting crew now. That's good. Guess we'll see what comes of it.
Goo work, keep it up!
11/22/2020 c377 10Power of Magic
A good chapter, and I look forward to the next one. I can't believe how stupid Luffy was to answer the snail phone like in did (both in the anime and this chapter), but then again he is a weird pirate
10Power of MagicA good chapter, and I look forward to the next one. I can't believe how stupid Luffy was to answer the snail phone like in did (both in the anime and this chapter), but then again he is a weird pirate
11/17/2020 c376 15Leaf Ranger
Oh wow. Bon Clay sacrificed himself. x.x That's so cool and sad.
overall, great chapter. Keep it up!
15Leaf RangerOh wow. Bon Clay sacrificed himself. x.x That's so cool and sad.
overall, great chapter. Keep it up!
11/14/2020 c376 7warhawk talons
Another great chapter although I wish it was longer.
I like how Naruto point out that he could have made a clone have it transform into the warden and then open the gate which meant Bon clay wouldn't have had to have made the sacrifice play again. But anyway I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
7warhawk talonsAnother great chapter although I wish it was longer.
I like how Naruto point out that he could have made a clone have it transform into the warden and then open the gate which meant Bon clay wouldn't have had to have made the sacrifice play again. But anyway I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
11/14/2020 c376 10Power of Magic
A good chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things'll go in the next one
10Power of MagicA good chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things'll go in the next one
11/12/2020 c1 2Oldtga
Sorry. I found your description strange like so many things could have happened to have put naruto into the east blue during wave ark lost to the currents for example and why biju biju fruit naruto allready has karuma sorry but it feels placed I hope you get more ideas also he could have been found by luffy and given a similar fruit.
2OldtgaSorry. I found your description strange like so many things could have happened to have put naruto into the east blue during wave ark lost to the currents for example and why biju biju fruit naruto allready has karuma sorry but it feels placed I hope you get more ideas also he could have been found by luffy and given a similar fruit.
11/9/2020 c375 15Leaf Ranger
Oh no, who got left behind? Was it Hancock? I hope she'll be okay. x.x
Great chapter, good work! *nods*
15Leaf RangerOh no, who got left behind? Was it Hancock? I hope she'll be okay. x.x
Great chapter, good work! *nods*
11/6/2020 c375 10Power of Magic
A good chapter, and I look forward to seeing what happens in the next one
10Power of MagicA good chapter, and I look forward to seeing what happens in the next one