for The Breaking1/2/2008 c2 PJ Zatken
Oh my...not good...not good at all...Muraki, I mean...
the chappie's very good... It's nice that you've laid out how the two care of each other very much...TsuSoka's so cute together :)
Oh my...not good...not good at all...Muraki, I mean...
the chappie's very good... It's nice that you've laid out how the two care of each other very much...TsuSoka's so cute together :)
1/2/2008 c1 PJ Zatken
Aww...those two are cute... And I had just been made aware of how warped my mind it when I read the first part of the story... If I was Tatsumi, I'd be the same way...lol...
Good chappie...will be reading more...
Aww...those two are cute... And I had just been made aware of how warped my mind it when I read the first part of the story... If I was Tatsumi, I'd be the same way...lol...
Good chappie...will be reading more...
10/16/2007 c13 
12Pugnacious Peace
HEY! Ryu is a character in my book... O.o Anywho...
Great story! I LOVED it!
12Pugnacious PeaceHEY! Ryu is a character in my book... O.o Anywho...
Great story! I LOVED it!
2/9/2007 c13 4Brynnie-Chan124
(almost crying) What a great story. Drama, scary stuff, and love all rolled into one. You caught Tsuzuki and Hisoka's relationship so well. As for your character, Kuri, she's one of the most in-depth and non-MarySue original characters I've ever seen. I can't wait to read the sequel... (And yes, that is partially out of my wanting to see Muraki again in spite of how evil he is. I'm a hopeless Muraki fangirl...^_^;;) Oh well. Keep writing! This was great for a first multi-chapter!
4Brynnie-Chan124(almost crying) What a great story. Drama, scary stuff, and love all rolled into one. You caught Tsuzuki and Hisoka's relationship so well. As for your character, Kuri, she's one of the most in-depth and non-MarySue original characters I've ever seen. I can't wait to read the sequel... (And yes, that is partially out of my wanting to see Muraki again in spite of how evil he is. I'm a hopeless Muraki fangirl...^_^;;) Oh well. Keep writing! This was great for a first multi-chapter!
12/6/2006 c13 67WingsofSmoke
*chanting* SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Please say yes to sequel! Mwahahaha, they are going to get married! And was that your first lemon? If so, very good. Mine kinda is weird, so... meh.
Muse: Cause you suck at lemons.
Saphira: Hey! It was my first one! You're no help! Besides, you're the one who planned it out, and I was just the writer!
Muse: *grumbles, goes to thinking*
Saphira: Anyway... please write the sequel! I love TsuSoka ficcies, especially the few in which they get married... aw, kawaii desu ne! Write soon!
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara and Thinking Muse
67WingsofSmoke*chanting* SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Please say yes to sequel! Mwahahaha, they are going to get married! And was that your first lemon? If so, very good. Mine kinda is weird, so... meh.
Muse: Cause you suck at lemons.
Saphira: Hey! It was my first one! You're no help! Besides, you're the one who planned it out, and I was just the writer!
Muse: *grumbles, goes to thinking*
Saphira: Anyway... please write the sequel! I love TsuSoka ficcies, especially the few in which they get married... aw, kawaii desu ne! Write soon!
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara and Thinking Muse
12/5/2006 c13 1Fuji and Eiji's Girl
WAH! SEQUAL! . Please? ^-^ Like, in the sequal, is it gonna be in the future? Or in the present? NO, WAIT! DON'T TELL ME! I'll wait... No, I need to know! No! ARG! Ur... *pout* Uhh... Che... *looks away* *pout* I'll wait until you write a sequal... If you do... . WAH! I can't wait for the sequal! If you write on... (geez, what's with my personality changes in this review...?) Well... Yeah... I'll wait! ^-^ Buh-bye! Just, do you think you might be able to tell me when you write the sequal...?
~Fuji and Eiji's Girl
"You're only a child once, go crazy, have fun, get into trouble... It may be worth it..."
1Fuji and Eiji's GirlWAH! SEQUAL! . Please? ^-^ Like, in the sequal, is it gonna be in the future? Or in the present? NO, WAIT! DON'T TELL ME! I'll wait... No, I need to know! No! ARG! Ur... *pout* Uhh... Che... *looks away* *pout* I'll wait until you write a sequal... If you do... . WAH! I can't wait for the sequal! If you write on... (geez, what's with my personality changes in this review...?) Well... Yeah... I'll wait! ^-^ Buh-bye! Just, do you think you might be able to tell me when you write the sequal...?
~Fuji and Eiji's Girl
"You're only a child once, go crazy, have fun, get into trouble... It may be worth it..."
10/28/2006 c11 67WingsofSmoke
WHAT! NO REVIEWS FOR CHAPTER 11? *glares at lazy people* Kono Bakas, review nandayaro? *huffs and then turns to author* Well, this little fic of yours is coming along great. I liked the part where Kuri went into Hisoka's mind and helped him escape. The glass effect was pretty good as well. I was thinking about putting that in one of my fics, but I'm not so sure I can now. *pouts* Well, keep up the good work!
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara
P.S. Can I please put the glass effect in my story as long as I cerdit it to you for the idea?
P.P.S. Dont' stop writing!
67WingsofSmokeWHAT! NO REVIEWS FOR CHAPTER 11? *glares at lazy people* Kono Bakas, review nandayaro? *huffs and then turns to author* Well, this little fic of yours is coming along great. I liked the part where Kuri went into Hisoka's mind and helped him escape. The glass effect was pretty good as well. I was thinking about putting that in one of my fics, but I'm not so sure I can now. *pouts* Well, keep up the good work!
~Saphira Nakare Ruakara
P.S. Can I please put the glass effect in my story as long as I cerdit it to you for the idea?
P.P.S. Dont' stop writing!
10/8/2006 c8 7laustic
Yay! Hisoka's been rescued but will he ever be all right after what Muraki has done to him?
7lausticYay! Hisoka's been rescued but will he ever be all right after what Muraki has done to him?
10/8/2006 c8 coffee-house-girl
I'm so happy that he at least has Hisoka back now, but I feel sorry for Kuri. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great Chapter.
I'm so happy that he at least has Hisoka back now, but I feel sorry for Kuri. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great Chapter.
9/25/2006 c7 laustic
Great chapter. I like the way you wrote Hisoka and Tsuzuki in this story. Its painfull to see Tsuzuki having to endure the training since he`s forced to see Hisoka in pain. I`m looking forward to the next chapter.
Great chapter. I like the way you wrote Hisoka and Tsuzuki in this story. Its painfull to see Tsuzuki having to endure the training since he`s forced to see Hisoka in pain. I`m looking forward to the next chapter.