for One Summer's Day10/17/2010 c11 
17MadaMag
Thanks for the chapter. I love from the manga: Yellow Minato and Red Kushina make Orange Naruto. (- about the favorite colors part)
17MadaMagThanks for the chapter. I love from the manga: Yellow Minato and Red Kushina make Orange Naruto. (- about the favorite colors part)
10/16/2010 c11 DarkRavie
Another very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next in your story.
Another very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next in your story.
5/30/2010 c10 1KiaraWangWilliams
Good chapter you did good on it ^^. Cant wait for the next chapter :D...Tho you could put a lil bit more of Minato and Naruto/Father and Son scenes in, but nonaless its good.
1KiaraWangWilliamsGood chapter you did good on it ^^. Cant wait for the next chapter :D...Tho you could put a lil bit more of Minato and Naruto/Father and Son scenes in, but nonaless its good.
5/26/2010 c10 1InARealPickle
What's Minato and Naruto going to do with a three story apartment building. That has the be the most random thing you've ever written in a fanfic.
So, is Minato planning on remarrying and have 20 kids, or is he hoping Naruto will?
A three story apartment building...
1InARealPickleWhat's Minato and Naruto going to do with a three story apartment building. That has the be the most random thing you've ever written in a fanfic.
So, is Minato planning on remarrying and have 20 kids, or is he hoping Naruto will?
A three story apartment building...
5/25/2010 c10 DarkRavie
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
4/22/2010 c9 DarkRavie
I like your fic. I was wondering, wouldn't Naruto be able to help with traps for physical and the mind. He is good at pranking and have a very creative mind for it.
I like your fic. I was wondering, wouldn't Naruto be able to help with traps for physical and the mind. He is good at pranking and have a very creative mind for it.
4/2/2010 c9 4KagomeGirl021
wow if the war is coming the academy must be set to war level which means they will get gennin training at a fast and more advanced/grueling pace. naruto and the rest of the rookies should be set up with those who have the time to train them hard; making them stronger and better able to defend their home. i think that minato should teach naruto as much as he knows and even write information down so that if he were to die again and naruto live on past this war then he could learn his dad's moves. naruto could become the greatest hokage to ever have lived.
naruto also needs lessons on strategy and stealth. maybe his dad can get him out of those bright orange clothes so that he ca better hide and fight during the up coming war. I would love to see naruto learn his dad's yellow flash move and see him truly become calmer and stronger to be the best leader he can be.
4KagomeGirl021wow if the war is coming the academy must be set to war level which means they will get gennin training at a fast and more advanced/grueling pace. naruto and the rest of the rookies should be set up with those who have the time to train them hard; making them stronger and better able to defend their home. i think that minato should teach naruto as much as he knows and even write information down so that if he were to die again and naruto live on past this war then he could learn his dad's moves. naruto could become the greatest hokage to ever have lived.
naruto also needs lessons on strategy and stealth. maybe his dad can get him out of those bright orange clothes so that he ca better hide and fight during the up coming war. I would love to see naruto learn his dad's yellow flash move and see him truly become calmer and stronger to be the best leader he can be.
2/4/2010 c8 maria
Very nice story. I think in time this will be an excellent fiction. Keep up the good work
Very nice story. I think in time this will be an excellent fiction. Keep up the good work
2/2/2010 c3 00
its a bit gay!
its a bit gay!