for Drink of Envy2/26/2016 c1 nayin17
Cute but Harry is so thick and it's his fault why Ginny is dancing with another man in the first place
Cute but Harry is so thick and it's his fault why Ginny is dancing with another man in the first place
1/11/2016 c1 
11ArwenFairTinuviel
I enjoyed reading this little story even though you wrote it years ago! :D You portray each of the characters really well, and it was funny to see Harry getting all sly and devious and using Latisha to make Ginny jealous! You described Harry's fierce jealousy so well (the monster reminiscent of JK's depiction in the sixth book), and the way that one glimpse of the French boy's hands on Ginny's waist made his jealousy smash its way out of its cage again. By the way, I think Jean was a good choice of name for a French guy, and Latisha (both her name, and her character) was perfect too - a nice original character. It was hilarious to see Harry willing himself to be bolder like his dad, and to see him and Ginny getting more and more intimate with their dance partners in order to win the 'game'! The ending where they got together, but Ginny still got away with giving Harry a slap, worked really well. There's a smattering of little spelling errors, but overall this was a fun and sweet story! Nice one Z! ;)
11ArwenFairTinuvielI enjoyed reading this little story even though you wrote it years ago! :D You portray each of the characters really well, and it was funny to see Harry getting all sly and devious and using Latisha to make Ginny jealous! You described Harry's fierce jealousy so well (the monster reminiscent of JK's depiction in the sixth book), and the way that one glimpse of the French boy's hands on Ginny's waist made his jealousy smash its way out of its cage again. By the way, I think Jean was a good choice of name for a French guy, and Latisha (both her name, and her character) was perfect too - a nice original character. It was hilarious to see Harry willing himself to be bolder like his dad, and to see him and Ginny getting more and more intimate with their dance partners in order to win the 'game'! The ending where they got together, but Ginny still got away with giving Harry a slap, worked really well. There's a smattering of little spelling errors, but overall this was a fun and sweet story! Nice one Z! ;)
1/14/2007 c1 InvisibleLilacNights
i love this fic, tell autunlover the slap was perfect!
great job!
^_^
ILN
i love this fic, tell autunlover the slap was perfect!
great job!
^_^
ILN
12/6/2006 c1 6Hermione-Hermyown
Nice, Ginny slaps Harry! I am so happy now... Yeah, go Ginny, you are most deffinately right, Harry deserved that, hahaha! Okay, so I have a funny thing to tell you about your story. I was reading it, and when I got to this line: All this obviously happened because of him. I was so engrossed in the story when suddenly, there was a knock at the door. I about screamed, because I was so into it! I am now just here to say, it was a priceless story, and I liked it!
Hermione-Hermyown
6Hermione-HermyownNice, Ginny slaps Harry! I am so happy now... Yeah, go Ginny, you are most deffinately right, Harry deserved that, hahaha! Okay, so I have a funny thing to tell you about your story. I was reading it, and when I got to this line: All this obviously happened because of him. I was so engrossed in the story when suddenly, there was a knock at the door. I about screamed, because I was so into it! I am now just here to say, it was a priceless story, and I liked it!
Hermione-Hermyown
9/23/2006 c1 5kayceejay-1
The third story I have read from you is the best so far, only because it's romance and very cute. Thanks for writing this (and your other fics) because it just makes me feel really content after reading them!
5kayceejay-1The third story I have read from you is the best so far, only because it's romance and very cute. Thanks for writing this (and your other fics) because it just makes me feel really content after reading them!
9/12/2006 c1 13quidditch7
Aww that was really really sweet. I loved the way you wrote it...and how the whole bit of them having differant partners to dance with was singularly to ignite eachother's jealousy. great job, well done! I would love to read more romance one-shots or full length stories written by you.
-quidditch7
13quidditch7Aww that was really really sweet. I loved the way you wrote it...and how the whole bit of them having differant partners to dance with was singularly to ignite eachother's jealousy. great job, well done! I would love to read more romance one-shots or full length stories written by you.
-quidditch7
9/2/2006 c1 BonjourSalut
You know you are unbelievably self critical. It is simply not possible for your work to be 'crap'. Amazing itself is an understatment.
Now write more romances!
You know you are unbelievably self critical. It is simply not possible for your work to be 'crap'. Amazing itself is an understatment.
Now write more romances!
9/1/2006 c1 SummerBaby94
i didnt think that the death eaters would come... but i really luv ginny slapping harry it funny in a twisted kinda way
i didnt think that the death eaters would come... but i really luv ginny slapping harry it funny in a twisted kinda way
9/1/2006 c1 10autumnlover
drink of envy - was that the booze?
first off, isnt jean a girls name? you'd be safer with jon (ugh) or Harry... no, waut, that's already been used. it's just cuae i read 'jean' and i thought, 'whoa, ginny!'.
latisha. i like it. i panicked and thought it was hermione for a second when you described her.
you use very cheezy lines. very very cheezy. ha!
likes the mood chage. i couldnt see that comeing for the world!
harry said 'what was that for' pensively. i dont think he ws deep in his thought over it. i just assumed he was surprsed. but ur the boss!
and a whole story for me! yay! go read MY oneshot, now...
10autumnloverdrink of envy - was that the booze?
first off, isnt jean a girls name? you'd be safer with jon (ugh) or Harry... no, waut, that's already been used. it's just cuae i read 'jean' and i thought, 'whoa, ginny!'.
latisha. i like it. i panicked and thought it was hermione for a second when you described her.
you use very cheezy lines. very very cheezy. ha!
likes the mood chage. i couldnt see that comeing for the world!
harry said 'what was that for' pensively. i dont think he ws deep in his thought over it. i just assumed he was surprsed. but ur the boss!
and a whole story for me! yay! go read MY oneshot, now...
9/1/2006 c1 CupcakeSweetheart
That was good! But I honestly thought Harry would of fought.
It was funny when ginny slapped him though!
That was good! But I honestly thought Harry would of fought.
It was funny when ginny slapped him though!
8/31/2006 c1 chrissy162
WoW! I liked it a lot! It was really good!
WoW! I liked it a lot! It was really good!