for One Foot In6/10/2016 c1 Guest
I have found two other fanfics who copied your idea, some of the lines even being the same. Though I can't see the stats I'm assuming that it did really well because it clearly influenced quite a few people. Also, this was written before their fanfics were, so it seems highly probable.
I have found two other fanfics who copied your idea, some of the lines even being the same. Though I can't see the stats I'm assuming that it did really well because it clearly influenced quite a few people. Also, this was written before their fanfics were, so it seems highly probable.
8/7/2014 c1 Neko-chan
If only Ed died and Mustang somehow found footage of what happened
If only Ed died and Mustang somehow found footage of what happened
7/11/2013 c1 
49Ender The Time Lady
I absoloultely fucking love you. This is brilliant, really, it is. Niceto see a fic that keeps everyone at what I imagin to be IC, eved for Ed. I like to think that's how he acts when he's just so completely fucking done.
Anyways, epic fic! Loved the whole thing!
49Ender The Time LadyI absoloultely fucking love you. This is brilliant, really, it is. Niceto see a fic that keeps everyone at what I imagin to be IC, eved for Ed. I like to think that's how he acts when he's just so completely fucking done.
Anyways, epic fic! Loved the whole thing!
2/26/2013 c1 14Victorious-Mind
Omg! I loved it so much! Though I would have liked it if Mustang and the others would have found out about it...
14Victorious-MindOmg! I loved it so much! Though I would have liked it if Mustang and the others would have found out about it...
3/29/2012 c1 Denna Tejat
I am impressed. Envy was just so in character, and it was really good described. The idea was awesome, and the fic actually gave me the shivers while I was reading it. You truly are talented, and I hope you make some sort of a sequel. I would gladly read it. :)
I am impressed. Envy was just so in character, and it was really good described. The idea was awesome, and the fic actually gave me the shivers while I was reading it. You truly are talented, and I hope you make some sort of a sequel. I would gladly read it. :)
3/23/2010 c1 157Stormy1x2
*blinksblinks* Holy HELL. I take back what I said on LJ - you ARE twisted. :D And I *love* it!
Envy was just so believable and Ed admitting his fear was like a releasing your breath after holding it while reading the whole thing. Beautiful details and my heart hurts for Envy knowing this was not an original idea. Awesome stuff, EFW, just awesome!
Favorited!
157Stormy1x2*blinksblinks* Holy HELL. I take back what I said on LJ - you ARE twisted. :D And I *love* it!
Envy was just so believable and Ed admitting his fear was like a releasing your breath after holding it while reading the whole thing. Beautiful details and my heart hurts for Envy knowing this was not an original idea. Awesome stuff, EFW, just awesome!
Favorited!
1/28/2010 c1 fullmetaluchia0006
this was amazing. I go goosebumps and the tension was incredible. The characters were so accurate and im still thrilled by it *^_^*
this was amazing. I go goosebumps and the tension was incredible. The characters were so accurate and im still thrilled by it *^_^*
4/22/2009 c1 Illa Scriptor
Dang.
That was beautifully horrific.
So in-character, and frightening, and realistic, and well-written... and the last bit, the hint of Envy's past... dang. Well done.
Dang.
That was beautifully horrific.
So in-character, and frightening, and realistic, and well-written... and the last bit, the hint of Envy's past... dang. Well done.
2/8/2009 c1 35Pensulliwen
Hah, that was hilarious! Great fic, it's always wonderful to see a story with a sadistic, in-character Envy after scrolling past endless sumaries proclaiming "FLUFFY INCEST RAPE" X_X Reading this was worth what I went through to find it, and I cannot think of a higher compliment to bestow upon you.
35PensulliwenHah, that was hilarious! Great fic, it's always wonderful to see a story with a sadistic, in-character Envy after scrolling past endless sumaries proclaiming "FLUFFY INCEST RAPE" X_X Reading this was worth what I went through to find it, and I cannot think of a higher compliment to bestow upon you.
10/19/2008 c1 XxHunter The One and OnlyxX
Heh. I love this story truly i do. This is the 2nd time i've read it. But this tme i decided not to be lazy. I loved the ending it pretty much is epic win. The way the story progressed kept you hooked. All in all great story. Sorry my reviews so bla...im tired but its late wtf is wrong with me.
Heh. I love this story truly i do. This is the 2nd time i've read it. But this tme i decided not to be lazy. I loved the ending it pretty much is epic win. The way the story progressed kept you hooked. All in all great story. Sorry my reviews so bla...im tired but its late wtf is wrong with me.