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9/7/2006 c1 Shadow Kitsune67
OMG LOL. "Are all Hyuugas perverts?" HAHA, Seriously that line cracked me up along with the fact it was supposed to be a clan secret...rofl. XD;; WHOO. NaruNeji fics rawk. XDD;; I HOPE YOU'LL CONTINUE. ^.^ There really isn't enough NaruNeji on this site and the way you described...Naru's awkward situation makes it all the while more interesting. xP
9/6/2006 c1 4vanitas hoth
i am loving this story! u have a great writing style thats refreshing from reading all those fics the same mistakes and overly used plots. i love the pairing, its one thats very... underappreciated. i'm thinking about writing a nar/nej fic but i want to finish my sas/naru first. keep up the good work, update soon! Ja! o_~
9/6/2006 c1 aliases101
That was a really good nejinaru fic. It was written better than some i have read. i thank you for that. you really must write a sequel. I'll be waiting.
9/6/2006 c1 Morriganna
Ok, I love this pairing and this story is quite well written. I think there should be a side effect to Naruto healing Neji...maybe a few demonic traits?
9/6/2006 c1 8ShinyObsessed
please continue! its an interesting concept
9/5/2006 c1 1XxXSasuNaruXxX
Lol, reading this greatly improved what has been the suckiest day in my life ~ thanks a lot ^^.
9/5/2006 c1 4narutomania
that was the best story i ever read wow u r a great writer did u practice writing or something how old r u wow update today or tommorw please pleae please or any thing please
9/5/2006 c1 31Roxy Leigh Blue
this is great so far! its a really great idea and i cant wait to see wwat you do with it!

much love always

hope x
9/4/2006 c1 7C-loke
That was trully amazing. Hyuuga's perverts? lol. That was very good. I can't wait to read more. Totally brilliant. Naruto and Neji are hot! lol
9/4/2006 c1 1066716
Dude. For the most part, I don't like writing in acronyms, but...ROTFLMAO. That was awesome. I feel a bit sorry for Naruto; I mean, constantly having a hard-on? Even though it's not technically a hard-on...Eh, confusion...But hey, if Neji's willing? Who WOULDN'T want to have Neji "Too beautiful to be real" Hyuuga under them?

Keep up the great work! It's nice knowing that this is gonna be a light-hearted fic. There are WAY too few of those; angst is everywhere, and though I've got nothing against angst, humor is so much better. So...update soon, please! I really can't wait!
9/4/2006 c1 19BrokenSouledPoetess
Oh...I DO hope you continue this. I love Neji and this story has started out so wonderfully.
9/4/2006 c1 55kirin-saga
Perverted Hyuuga! I love that!
9/4/2006 c1 35darke wulf
Great story so far! I am a fan of the Naru/Neji pairing, but trying to find new stories often leaves me frustrated. I love the thought of the entire Hyuuga Clan being a bunch of perverts ;-)

I also like the way you've characterize the players so far. Your more lighthearted approach is refreshing, without being parody-like.

I might suggest, however, looking into getting a beta. I think it would add polish to the story.

Overall, however, I truly enjoyed this chapter, and very much look forward to reading future ones!
9/4/2006 c1 8aswrittenbykat
...*snickers* Oh god, this is the first fic where Naruto has that problem...I love it! I also love the idea of all Hyuuga's being perverts. Really really hope you continue. Adios!
9/4/2006 c1 3whee XD

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