for Desiring Other Times6/6/2023 c3 Guest
I think Snape might have asked those questions because he have Lily's eyes or something like that, like in cannon, Snape and Lily's past, because Lily is pretty intelligent, like how she is described in cannon.
I think Snape might have asked those questions because he have Lily's eyes or something like that, like in cannon, Snape and Lily's past, because Lily is pretty intelligent, like how she is described in cannon.
6/6/2023 c2 Guest
and also, I really like how Jeremy's character is portrayed- on one side, he seems to not notice the neglect, and because of a happy childhood, he is still like a innocent little kid.
and also, I really like how Jeremy's character is portrayed- on one side, he seems to not notice the neglect, and because of a happy childhood, he is still like a innocent little kid.
6/6/2023 c2 Guest
actually, in cannon, you answer a riddle to get in the common room, but the mirror is also pretty good, just that the Ravenclaws could have their ties stolen or something, like how Hermione stole Slytherin uniforms during the chamber of secrets when they used polyjuice potion. of course, I might also be wrong. (please do not take this as a flame, it is just a comment).
actually, in cannon, you answer a riddle to get in the common room, but the mirror is also pretty good, just that the Ravenclaws could have their ties stolen or something, like how Hermione stole Slytherin uniforms during the chamber of secrets when they used polyjuice potion. of course, I might also be wrong. (please do not take this as a flame, it is just a comment).
11/21/2022 c18 Meh
This story is the most confusing story I've ever read in my life. You change the perspectives from Harry, you took his magic away, and added a future Harry because you apparently thought combining a Future-Harry comes back in time idea was a good idea. I'm glad you gave up on this story because you're a horrible writer and this story feels rushed, good day.
This story is the most confusing story I've ever read in my life. You change the perspectives from Harry, you took his magic away, and added a future Harry because you apparently thought combining a Future-Harry comes back in time idea was a good idea. I'm glad you gave up on this story because you're a horrible writer and this story feels rushed, good day.
8/31/2022 c3 Guest
I can just hear Mary Sue Mudblood screeching, "How dare he know something I don't! He must be cheating!"
I can just hear Mary Sue Mudblood screeching, "How dare he know something I don't! He must be cheating!"
9/20/2021 c1 Guest
The Summoning Charm doesn’t work on living beings.
The Summoning Charm doesn’t work on living beings.
5/23/2021 c7 rueoday
Sorry, I saw a comment by a user by the name of Alexioes?
Just because a parent doesn't hit you, doesn't mean they don't abuse you. Harry isn't ungrateful and he doesn't hate his brother. James and Lily are a bit neglectful and have yet to show any genuine care for Harry. Jeremy lacks self-awareness. Actually, Lily and James' neglectfulness borders on endangerment as you will see in the next few chapters. Lily and James are FAR from good parents to Harry. Offering Harry a broom wasn't good parenting, it was only offered because James wanted the fame that came with both of his children on the Quiddich team in their first year. Not that he actually cared about Harry or his hobbies. They didn't check with him during the troll incident, they care more about Jeremy's injury than Harry facing the Dark Lord and there has been a grand total of 1 letter from them during the duration of this school year.
Jeremy isn't a bad person. He was raised to think of the treatment of his brother was absolutely normal. Everyone else just helps this because they don't notice either because of his fame. Flitwick notices when they go to the Headmaster's office because in that situation it's obvious. But skipping over Harry is normal for other people who simply see it as taking care of their savior.
I don't really care to write more about this since I drop this story after Jeremy is possessed by canon Harry and this whole fanfiction seems more crack to me but if it wasn't for this diversion I would love this story. I'm curious about the whole 'Harry anamagus is a vampire' thing and how Draco can now speak parseltongue. How would that have changed year two?
Sorry, I saw a comment by a user by the name of Alexioes?
Just because a parent doesn't hit you, doesn't mean they don't abuse you. Harry isn't ungrateful and he doesn't hate his brother. James and Lily are a bit neglectful and have yet to show any genuine care for Harry. Jeremy lacks self-awareness. Actually, Lily and James' neglectfulness borders on endangerment as you will see in the next few chapters. Lily and James are FAR from good parents to Harry. Offering Harry a broom wasn't good parenting, it was only offered because James wanted the fame that came with both of his children on the Quiddich team in their first year. Not that he actually cared about Harry or his hobbies. They didn't check with him during the troll incident, they care more about Jeremy's injury than Harry facing the Dark Lord and there has been a grand total of 1 letter from them during the duration of this school year.
Jeremy isn't a bad person. He was raised to think of the treatment of his brother was absolutely normal. Everyone else just helps this because they don't notice either because of his fame. Flitwick notices when they go to the Headmaster's office because in that situation it's obvious. But skipping over Harry is normal for other people who simply see it as taking care of their savior.
I don't really care to write more about this since I drop this story after Jeremy is possessed by canon Harry and this whole fanfiction seems more crack to me but if it wasn't for this diversion I would love this story. I'm curious about the whole 'Harry anamagus is a vampire' thing and how Draco can now speak parseltongue. How would that have changed year two?
5/13/2021 c6 Guest
LOL THE LAST PART WAS SO FUNNY
LOL THE LAST PART WAS SO FUNNY
5/13/2021 c5 Guest
lol his gargoyle likes PEZ xdxdxd
lol his gargoyle likes PEZ xdxdxd
5/9/2020 c2 
1violettelarawilliams
Ravenclaw has an -I think- animal statue that asks Riddles, Hufflepuff have barrels where you have to tap the correct rhythm or you get -I don't remember what type of- liquid dumped on you
1violettelarawilliamsRavenclaw has an -I think- animal statue that asks Riddles, Hufflepuff have barrels where you have to tap the correct rhythm or you get -I don't remember what type of- liquid dumped on you
4/28/2020 c22 7uflesh940
This was pretty good, actually. I love the blending of both the WBWL and the time travel elements.
7uflesh940This was pretty good, actually. I love the blending of both the WBWL and the time travel elements.
11/8/2018 c22 tom123asdf
I liked the early parts of this story but think you tried to put to many ideas into on thing. In trying not to make an overpowered harry, you went to far the other way.
I liked the early parts of this story but think you tried to put to many ideas into on thing. In trying not to make an overpowered harry, you went to far the other way.