for Revenge isn't sweet it's salty4/21/2013 c2 Guest
spelling and grammar are awful, and you wouldn't get injuries like that from 20 with the belt. totally over-dramatic.
spelling and grammar are awful, and you wouldn't get injuries like that from 20 with the belt. totally over-dramatic.
12/18/2008 c3 
6giantzacface
the beginning of that dream was fantastic. sometimes i dream stuff like that but i'm not even out for revenge. usually i end up killing my friends in really random ways. i don't know why, it's a little disturbing to be honest.
and, again, ryan is perfect. i love him in this story. and i'm glad troy isn't mad at sharpay. at least he can understand. some people don't handle fear well and they act out because of it. it happens.
6giantzacfacethe beginning of that dream was fantastic. sometimes i dream stuff like that but i'm not even out for revenge. usually i end up killing my friends in really random ways. i don't know why, it's a little disturbing to be honest.
and, again, ryan is perfect. i love him in this story. and i'm glad troy isn't mad at sharpay. at least he can understand. some people don't handle fear well and they act out because of it. it happens.
12/18/2008 c2 giantzacface
i completely agree with sharpay about not liking hospitals. i always think i should like them because they are so dramatic (according to grey's anatomy) and funny (according to scrubs) but that's not actually the case at all. once you step inside a hospital it smells funny and you can feel death in the air and there is a way heightened chance at seeing somebody's backside ...if you know what i mean ... even more so, the backside of somebody you don't want to see.
ryan was really sweet trying so hard to take care of sharpay. that was really cute.
and i think gabriella can just shove it, though I may be slightly biased. i, personally, can't stand the girl.
i completely agree with sharpay about not liking hospitals. i always think i should like them because they are so dramatic (according to grey's anatomy) and funny (according to scrubs) but that's not actually the case at all. once you step inside a hospital it smells funny and you can feel death in the air and there is a way heightened chance at seeing somebody's backside ...if you know what i mean ... even more so, the backside of somebody you don't want to see.
ryan was really sweet trying so hard to take care of sharpay. that was really cute.
and i think gabriella can just shove it, though I may be slightly biased. i, personally, can't stand the girl.
12/18/2008 c1 giantzacface
hahah, oh, poor ryan. he thought she was on her period. that would be so awkward for him. but it was really cute how he kept referring to himself as big brother and her as little sister. i love when ryans protective of his sister.
you know, this reminded me of that one scene in ever after. when drew barrymores character got whipped and the nicer step-sister was helping her clean up afterwards. i always thought that scene was so sad. no matter how much the step-sister wanted to connect, they were simply on separate playing fields. at least here Ryan knows better what he's dealing with. and he and sharpay are on the same team.
i hope sharpay gets back at gabriella good. it was pretty spineless of her to call after sharpay right after she paddled her.
hahah, oh, poor ryan. he thought she was on her period. that would be so awkward for him. but it was really cute how he kept referring to himself as big brother and her as little sister. i love when ryans protective of his sister.
you know, this reminded me of that one scene in ever after. when drew barrymores character got whipped and the nicer step-sister was helping her clean up afterwards. i always thought that scene was so sad. no matter how much the step-sister wanted to connect, they were simply on separate playing fields. at least here Ryan knows better what he's dealing with. and he and sharpay are on the same team.
i hope sharpay gets back at gabriella good. it was pretty spineless of her to call after sharpay right after she paddled her.
4/23/2007 c3 i have left the building 4ever
I loved it!
hah i loved sharpya with the paddle and gabriella. SHe like beats the shiskabob outta her and then is all sweet 'tootles' LMAO. haha.
Awesome Chappie
Ryan's such a sweetheartâ„
ILY RYAN
:)
nikki
I loved it!
hah i loved sharpya with the paddle and gabriella. SHe like beats the shiskabob outta her and then is all sweet 'tootles' LMAO. haha.
Awesome Chappie
Ryan's such a sweetheartâ„
ILY RYAN
:)
nikki
4/23/2007 c2 i have left the building 4ever
Haha
'We're a very affectionate family'
that made me laugh.
good chappie! :)
Haha
'We're a very affectionate family'
that made me laugh.
good chappie! :)
11/10/2006 c3 2polopopiinprepxx
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10/12/2006 c3 11nikpik
Good chapter, bur you need to make paragraphs. The reader gets confused if you don't. After each idea, and each person speaking. That should make it less confusing to read! I liked the chapter, and I can't wait for more!
11nikpikGood chapter, bur you need to make paragraphs. The reader gets confused if you don't. After each idea, and each person speaking. That should make it less confusing to read! I liked the chapter, and I can't wait for more!
10/10/2006 c2 nikpik
Sounds great so far! I love how Ryan is so sweet and caring... Can't wait for more!
Sounds great so far! I love how Ryan is so sweet and caring... Can't wait for more!