for Work Hazard6/15/2021 c11 Guest
oHHH MY GODDD! you left us hanigng T_T poor poor sasuke! i have no sympathy for this kimimaru fordoing that to him btw. and i WISH they'd just hurry up and find him T_T
oHHH MY GODDD! you left us hanigng T_T poor poor sasuke! i have no sympathy for this kimimaru fordoing that to him btw. and i WISH they'd just hurry up and find him T_T
6/15/2021 c1 Guest
hiii! this fic is amazinggg! have you considered posting it on ao3 as well? fanfiction is a dying website T_T
hiii! this fic is amazinggg! have you considered posting it on ao3 as well? fanfiction is a dying website T_T
10/14/2017 c8 infinite eternity
No! I'm sad about Kisame. Somewhat despairing for Sasuke. Worried for Kakashi.
No! I'm sad about Kisame. Somewhat despairing for Sasuke. Worried for Kakashi.
8/6/2016 c9 FaithSuteki
I thought that the people who barged into the hotel were Karin, a red-haired girl, Jugo, tall and big, and Suigetsu, who has white hair... Though maybe the manga/anime wasn't that far when you wrote this. But I think the people you chose makes more sense. Is Ji****maru, the spider guy going to make an appearance also?
I thought that the people who barged into the hotel were Karin, a red-haired girl, Jugo, tall and big, and Suigetsu, who has white hair... Though maybe the manga/anime wasn't that far when you wrote this. But I think the people you chose makes more sense. Is Ji****maru, the spider guy going to make an appearance also?
5/9/2016 c11 ns73
I've been reading some of the really old (and sadly incomplete) fics in the Naruto fandom and I really love this one. Everything is so dark. Even Kakasasu, the main couple, is kinda wrong because of their age. I miss the times where Itachi was portrayed like a sociopath with an obsession for Sasuke. This newly revealed kind Itachi just doesn't align with the Itachi in Naruto Part 1.
The most recent chapters really upped in the darkness though. I honestly didn't expect any of it. Itachi ripping off Kakashi's skin? Itachi torturing Kabuto? Poor Sasuke involuntarily being a cannibal? Orochimaru lecturing about how he goes about breaking people down? I thought that last para was really smart though. Never seen the irony between cruelty and kindness before.
I know its been like 10 years since the last update but I would like to let you know I really enjoyed these 11 chapters (if you do see this). No regrets starting on this incomplete story. The only thing I wasn't too fond of is the Naruto cross-dressing parts. Never did enjoy stories with Naruto cross-dressing. Sasuke on the other hand... Some more Nejisasu would have been a plus too :)
I've been reading some of the really old (and sadly incomplete) fics in the Naruto fandom and I really love this one. Everything is so dark. Even Kakasasu, the main couple, is kinda wrong because of their age. I miss the times where Itachi was portrayed like a sociopath with an obsession for Sasuke. This newly revealed kind Itachi just doesn't align with the Itachi in Naruto Part 1.
The most recent chapters really upped in the darkness though. I honestly didn't expect any of it. Itachi ripping off Kakashi's skin? Itachi torturing Kabuto? Poor Sasuke involuntarily being a cannibal? Orochimaru lecturing about how he goes about breaking people down? I thought that last para was really smart though. Never seen the irony between cruelty and kindness before.
I know its been like 10 years since the last update but I would like to let you know I really enjoyed these 11 chapters (if you do see this). No regrets starting on this incomplete story. The only thing I wasn't too fond of is the Naruto cross-dressing parts. Never did enjoy stories with Naruto cross-dressing. Sasuke on the other hand... Some more Nejisasu would have been a plus too :)
10/22/2015 c11 Dark Lady Ciel
Best fic ever!
The way u write... just perfect, really captivating
Congrats for your creativity and talent, please, don't give up of this fanfiction!
Best fic ever!
The way u write... just perfect, really captivating
Congrats for your creativity and talent, please, don't give up of this fanfiction!
9/22/2015 c7 
3gonnaleave
I love Itachi, a LOT! ...but I wanted to punch him when he was talking like that about poor Kisame. But...I sorta do get their jadedness about people being good to them or doing something for them only to get something in return. Sigh. I feel bad for all of them! ...btw if kakashi decided to /not/ hand Sasuke over to Orochimaru, what's he gonna do now?
3gonnaleaveI love Itachi, a LOT! ...but I wanted to punch him when he was talking like that about poor Kisame. But...I sorta do get their jadedness about people being good to them or doing something for them only to get something in return. Sigh. I feel bad for all of them! ...btw if kakashi decided to /not/ hand Sasuke over to Orochimaru, what's he gonna do now?
9/21/2015 c6 gonnaleave
OMIGOD KAKASHIS DREAM HOLY SHIT!
...I /love/ gai and itachi!
Omigod /who/ in deed drugged Sasuke?!¿?
OMIGOD KAKASHIS DREAM HOLY SHIT!
...I /love/ gai and itachi!
Omigod /who/ in deed drugged Sasuke?!¿?
9/21/2015 c5 gonnaleave
I quite enjoy their makeout sessions buuut I don't think it should've happened so soon after Kisame's murder... especially since Sasuke had been fiercely overcome by emotion andwas ggrieving not moments ago.
I quite enjoy their makeout sessions buuut I don't think it should've happened so soon after Kisame's murder... especially since Sasuke had been fiercely overcome by emotion andwas ggrieving not moments ago.
9/21/2015 c3 gonnaleave
Awww! Naji and Naruto actually care!l that's so sweet!
While i would normally agree with Sasuke, I'm afraid he's practically digging his grave by ignoring Neji's warning etc. Poor bby
Awww! Naji and Naruto actually care!l that's so sweet!
While i would normally agree with Sasuke, I'm afraid he's practically digging his grave by ignoring Neji's warning etc. Poor bby
9/21/2015 c1 BlankAngel
Gaahhh! I really hate Orochimaru . heartless snake
OMIGOD I HOPE ITACHI DOESN'T DIE OR SMTH
Gaahhh! I really hate Orochimaru . heartless snake
OMIGOD I HOPE ITACHI DOESN'T DIE OR SMTH
11/22/2014 c11 7ackleswantsasnackles
Please please please update soon like this is amazing I need to find out what happens aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
7ackleswantsasnacklesPlease please please update soon like this is amazing I need to find out what happens aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa